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I Love You

You are the fuel of my lantern The Moon of my sea The reef of my ocean The trout of my stream You are the oasis of my desert The sole star of my sky The jewell of my shirt The pearl of my shell You__ the trout of my stream The chocolate of my cake The mitochondria of my cell The fruit of my shake Only if you knew the affinity that I hold for you Forever we will moor on heaven's shores for sure ~17-10-21 (For I love you poetry contest by Eve)

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Shane Thacker

Date: 2/11/2024 11:13:00 AM

I hope to be loved this much some day. Nicely written, Paghunda!

Deb M

Date: 12/28/2021 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2021 6:45:00 AM

- A wonderful writing ... - I wish you a lovely Christmas and a blessed New Year, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 12/6/2021 9:01:00 AM

Hello Paghunda - Your entry is lovely and it amazes me how entries of love never get old or redundant. I very much enjoyed your intake and entry. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 3/22/2024 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Lisa

Eric Cohen

Date: 11/28/2021 8:54:00 PM

Moving and original conception. Wonderful poetry, Paghunda.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/23/2021 10:50:00 AM

I love it, Paghunda! Somebody is very lucky to have such a lovely romantic dedication! ~ Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/19/2021 3:07:00 AM

Lovely poem. I enjoyed. God bless you. Love, Gina

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:38:00 AM

Ameen. Thank you

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:30:00 PM

Some terrific writing!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/8/2021 9:48:00 AM

Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/6/2021 7:16:00 AM

Just beautiful Paghunda …. Deep and kind and poignant with messages from the heart . Belated congratulations on your win . Thank you for your comment on my poem . Blessings, Susan :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/6/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Lawrence

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/2/2021 8:55:00 PM

Dear Paghunda, you bare you heart and soul so beautifully. Amazing imagery graces the depth of your expressive poem. Congratulations for your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/6/2021 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Susan. Really kind of you

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/2/2021 12:14:00 AM

You describe the essence of our poetic addiction Kudos my lovely friend, for it means all the above to me also. I see you won and so rightly so. Congratulations.dear Paghunda. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/2/2021 5:43:00 AM

Hey Jenn, thank you for stopping by.. Stay blessed