Paghunda Zahid Poet Rhyme

I Love You

You are the fuel of my lantern
The Moon of my sea
The reef of my ocean
The trout of my stream

You are the oasis of my desert 
The sole star of my sky
The jewell of my shirt
The pearl of my shell

You__ the trout of my stream
The chocolate of my cake
The mitochondria of my cell
The fruit of my shake

Only if you knew the affinity that I hold for you
Forever we will moor on heaven's shores for sure

~17-10-21
(For I love you poetry contest by Eve)

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Shane Thacker February 11, 2024 at 11:13 AM I hope to be loved this much some day. Nicely written, Paghunda! Paghunda Zahid August 2, 2025 at 11:39 AM May you find love and peace in life. Ameen

Deb M December 28, 2021 at 9:10 PM Beautiful! Debx Paghunda Zahid August 2, 2025 at 11:39 AM Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2021 at 6:45 AM - A wonderful writing ... - I wish you a lovely Christmas and a blessed New Year, Paghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paghunda Zahid August 2, 2025 at 11:39 AM Thanks Anne

Lisa Ricci December 6, 2021 at 9:01 AM Hello Paghunda - Your entry is lovely and it amazes me how entries of love never get old or redundant. I very much enjoyed your intake and entry. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup. Paghunda Zahid March 22, 2024 at 9:01 AM Thanks Lisa

Eric Cohen November 28, 2021 at 8:54 PM Moving and original conception. Wonderful poetry, Paghunda.

Paul Callus November 23, 2021 at 10:50 AM I love it, Paghunda! Somebody is very lucky to have such a lovely romantic dedication! ~ Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh November 19, 2021 at 3:07 AM Lovely poem. I enjoyed. God bless you. Love, Gina Paghunda Zahid November 20, 2021 at 9:38 AM Ameen. Thank you

Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2021 at 6:30 PM Some terrific writing! Paghunda Zahid November 8, 2021 at 9:48 AM :)

Susan Lawrence November 6, 2021 at 7:16 AM Just beautiful Paghunda …. Deep and kind and poignant with messages from the heart . Belated congratulations on your win . Thank you for your comment on my poem . Blessings, Susan :) Paghunda Zahid November 6, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thanks Lawrence

Susan Ashley November 2, 2021 at 8:55 PM Dear Paghunda, you bare you heart and soul so beautifully. Amazing imagery graces the depth of your expressive poem. Congratulations for your excellent win, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Paghunda Zahid November 6, 2021 at 7:47 AM Thank you Susan. Really kind of you

Jennifer Proxenos November 2, 2021 at 12:14 AM You describe the essence of our poetic addiction Kudos my lovely friend, for it means all the above to me also. I see you won and so rightly so. Congratulations.dear Paghunda. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Paghunda Zahid November 2, 2021 at 5:43 AM Hey Jenn, thank you for stopping by.. Stay blessed

Shirley Candy October 26, 2021 at 11:21 PM Oh I adore this one. Paghunda Zahid November 2, 2021 at 5:43 AM Thanks Shirley

Constance La France October 25, 2021 at 8:35 AM Paghunda, lovely poem and congratulations on your win in Eve's contest ~ friendship and poetry _Constance Paghunda Zahid October 25, 2021 at 9:06 AM Thank you :-)

Christuraj Alex October 25, 2021 at 12:03 AM Great comparisons of the lover.Poetically genuine! Congratulations! Paghunda Zahid October 25, 2021 at 9:29 AM Thanks Alex

Eve Roper October 24, 2021 at 6:47 PM Congratulations on your win, Pagunda. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve Paghunda Zahid October 25, 2021 at 9:03 AM Thank you Eve. I appreciate it :-)

Karen Jones October 17, 2021 at 5:31 PM What a romantic write. I enjoyed your poem. Paghunda Zahid October 25, 2021 at 9:03 AM Thanks