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The Fruit - Pantoum

The fruit is cool and wet in my hands,
luscious fruit, orange in the moonlight.
I am breathing the savory scent,
the juices taste fresh and sweeten my lips.
Luscious fruit, orange in the moonlight,
plump painted hues in every sight.
The juices taste fresh and sweeten my lips,
gloved by thick green skins in the moonlight. 
plump painted hues in every sight,
I am breathing in the savory scent,
gloved by thick green skins in the moonlight
the fruit is cool and wet in my hands


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Date: 1/4/2012 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 2. Wishing you the best in the finals Julie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Julie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2011 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Julie, Pantoum is an amazing form to write in, best of luck if this is for a contest~~
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:34:00 AM
very nice, this form fascinates me ( because I'm terrified of it), best of luck in the contest
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