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The Frozen Tongue

My life started with adoption
then realizing had a stammer as well
struggle through school glad to leave
at fifteen still struggling to tell

First job was electrician so spark
but colour blindness put that off rail
then worked as storeman rest of career
in various places never going stale

Got married to Jean in mid-twenties
but she passed away in less than year
that night I fell on God's merciful grace
received Christ who became so dear

Then nine years later met Christine
got wed after nine months courtship
now last year celebrated silver wed
a blessed marriage such sweet fellowship

But the frozen tongue has remained
has gone up and down many a hill
it's likened to an iceberg at sea
people only see the tip as you will

Like the iceberg real trouble down below
all the damaged emotions lie at foot
getting over them still all frozen
needs real heat to melt way at root

So persevere on to loosen tongue
some progress is at winter season
writing poetry brings real calm
summers pushing ice onto easing

(I had written this concerning my stammer, hence my frozen tongue all through my life but thought it showed one idea of being frozen in time.
This was written a number of years ago but thought new friends may like to read it.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 5/28/2023 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful autobiographical rhyme filled with pathos
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/28/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Sabahat,Glad you enjoyed this piece and thought it beautifully rhyme too. Blessings,Gordon
Date: 1/9/2023 10:30:00 PM
I enjoyed this Gordon, it was as if being given a glimpse into the real you. I have not been able to write like that in years. It is like meeting a new friend :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/10/2023 4:07:00 AM
Thanks F.J., Glad you enjoyed this and found it like meeting a new friend. Have a great day,Gordon
Date: 12/26/2022 4:09:00 AM
Hi Gordon you have mentioned this before and I hope 2023 brings a true miracle for you if not just know that God knows you well and has for some time in the distant future prepared a special place for you, for I am certain He holds you close to his heart. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/26/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thanks again Jennifer, Glad you enjoyed this one and thanks for your blessed words. This was written a few years ago but in the last 7 months there's been some improvement. Which has been encouraging. God bless, Gordon
Date: 12/21/2022 11:40:00 AM
May the slight problem you have in the Aggregate of humanitys woes be Greatly lessened and removed Gordon ' My mothers cousin stuttered badly due To intense beatings from his father He came to live with my grandmother Who gave him a piece of wood and small Knife she was in the buisness of selling Carpet and she told him to whittle the wood When speaking to any customers which got Him able to hold a conversation at least.' .He Was quite clever could beat anyone at chequres Yet every now and then
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/21/2022 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate your testimony of your mother's cousin and their efforts to beat his stammer, indeed many have found relief from various avenues to beat it. In recent months I have found some relief and progress in my efforts to speak more fluent. Christmas Blessings, Gordon
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/21/2022 11:48:00 AM
That strong stammer would Cut in ' my familiy were not Practicing Christians so he Would have had no prayer over Him for this ' I was an oddity Among them being born after My mother was past childbearing, I was given a childrens bible by them however and I had an early reading age.' We Used church only for death birth and marriage like a restaurant really as opposed to Using your own kitchen.'
Date: 12/18/2022 1:41:00 AM
Through your poetry is a lovely way to get to know you Gordon, and I like very much what I read. A poem and a life to be proud of.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/18/2022 5:53:00 AM
Thanks again Wendy, Glad that you liked this piece and found it showed a life to be proud of. Thanks so much for your encouragement, blessings,Gordon
Date: 12/16/2022 8:23:00 PM
Your life has been one of hardships, I understand. But God's protective hands were always on you. You can be so happy and proud that you braved all hurdles in life and have come out Victorious! I see the three trinities in your life- God, your soulmate Christine and Poetry ! Before these, your stammering is no great issue. Stay happy and blessed, dear Gordon
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/17/2022 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Valsa, Glad you enjoyed this piece and grateful for your encouraging words. Blessings always ,Gordon
Date: 12/14/2022 10:35:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Gordon. I prefer poems based on realism. You have done quite well! I appreciate humble poets like you. I don’t need an extravaganza of forms, nor am I mpressed by Thesaurian English. This a poem from your heart, taken from the pages of your life. What more could I ask of you. I answered your soupmai. And making this a FAV. God bless you. Keep writing. Belated wedding congratulations! Christmas blessings, Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/15/2022 6:50:00 AM
Using BIG words to impress the reader…but no heart in the pioem The Thesaurs is no doubt avaialable on line these days. You write with clarity and are you. To me, that is the best gift to give anyone…yourself! Hope that clarifies things..,.Pangie.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/15/2022 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Pangie, Glad you loved this piece and appreciate your encouraging words. What is Thesaurian English? PLeased you made it a fave for you. Blessings always, Gordon
Date: 12/13/2022 3:11:00 PM
You've certainly been through it Gordon , thankfully you've found happiness along the way. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 12/14/2022 12:44:00 AM
Thanks Tom, Glad you liked it, I'm ok though in recent weeks found I've diabetes type 2 so I'm on a sugar-free health diet and trying to get the weight down before my next blood test in March. This cold weather is making life a struggle too. Blessings, Gordon

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