The Frozen Senses

The frozen senses

The frozen senses, lives again
With a sunshine of hope
Over it, making each pain
Active again, and the fears door ope.

The twinkling dreams which are
Ready for show, the blushing delights
Reluctant, all the years near and far
And all the lows and heights.

Zeniths of glories, ready
To motivate, the disasters of past
Ready to teach, the victories steady,
Failures fast, all are ready to teach at last.
                                                                            Akash Sangwan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 30, 2014 at 9:29 PM
AKASH, this is a sweet win:) Congratulations, <3 always ~SKAT~ <3
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April 26, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. Joyce
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April 26, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Akash ,Congratulations. <3 Thank you so much for supporting my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "Dinner Date" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22220&PoetID=18720 ***Have a Nice Day*** LINDA
Mehta Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 6:39 AM
Awesome win with three stanza suite. Congrats, very unique, Akash
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May 1, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Thanks dr ram
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March 15, 2014 at 4:40 AM
Lovely poem. We can look forward to the future by learning from past mistakes. // paul
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March 15, 2014 at 5:52 AM
thanks for appreciating @paul
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