The Four Winds of Christmas

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Old Rinzburger was dead, 
only his wife has doubts. 
Death certificate had been signed.
by the banker, his best friend, 
He will soon take bids on his property.

An ancient once busy windmill 
dominates the old Rinzburger place
as a memory that comes and goes
in the mind of great-grandma.
Her dementia is getting worse.

Her only child and his wife, 
the last of the Rinzburgers,
have five grown daughters. 
Sixteen grands smile, recalling
Gram's special Christmas feasts.
	
Like the old family mill	
grandma is one of a kind;
she was driven by the wind
to serve her family and friends
especially during the holidays.

This Christmas may be their last 
Grandma has come as a guest.
Someone brought fried chicken,		
deep-fried from  KFC, with lots of
biscuits and gravy and sides.

The younger male cousins
brought sacks of White Castles,      
and mom picked up a couple of
salads from Kroger-deli
and Haagen-Dazs for dessert.

The winds of Christmas blow,
winds of the past, winds of the almost gone,
winds of the present, and future winds.
Will the Rinzburger fortune be lost;
will the family will drift apart?

Grandpa died last Christmas season
and the old windmill may succumb
but both memories will survive
being torn down, demolished.
Thoughtfully, a grandson asked:

"Why just tear it down? 
It would make a fantastic museum?
Folks could visit and learn so much
about their ancestors' way of life.
And another spoke up:

"We could remodel or modernize it.
Maybe build an addition with electric
power.  We could provide 
jobs for people at a new plant.
Still another grandchild said:

"My vote is to sell it, and donate the funds
to support medical research on
Alzheimer's.  Gran-daddy 
would have done that for Gram."
Then Gram herself waved a fragile hand.

In one of her more lucid moments
she commended all their ideas
"The Rinzburger name may die
but your Grandpa's spirit lives strong."
He would be proud of all of you.

Two years down the road, Rinzburgers gather;
Gram left them on last Christmas Day.
Building and hiring for a new mill  - well-underway. 
The old windmill stands in front - a museum.
AFA is slated to receive a generous yearly check
for the Rinzburger Winds of Christmas Fund.

PS:  this is a merging of two of my poems:
The Old Rinzberger Place and Four Winds of Christmas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/11/2015 9:15:00 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:20:00 AM
A wonderful one Reason,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:44:00 PM
What a pleasant Christmas tale you wrote Season! ...full of positivity. This reminds me of our family windmill; my grandfather was the last miller, now passed away; the windmill is still in working order, being looked after by the Local Council and providing joy to the many who visit it. Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 1/5/2015 1:48:00 PM
Reason, congratulations on your fine win for your wonderful poem! What a wonderful story! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:48:00 AM
Beautiful story many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:22:00 PM
thanks, Jan. You comment is appreciated very much.
Date: 1/4/2015 11:41:00 PM
Nice done poem on the theme with a wonderful tale, congrats, Reason
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Date: 12/18/2014 2:14:00 PM
Beautiful story, excellent presentation, loved it!
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Date: 12/20/2014 4:46:00 PM
thank you, Maurice, I appreciate and value your opinion.
Date: 12/14/2014 3:00:00 PM
What a lovely story.. I am surmising that it is a true one..Enjoyed...BG
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Date: 12/17/2014 9:48:00 PM
Your surmising is excellent for the most part. Name has been changed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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