The Forgotten Toy

Glassy eyes patiently watch the empty room,
reflecting each slight movement of light.
Muffled noises stroke the tiny head,
inviting the ebony melody of night.

Dust leaves its fingerprints on the stuffed body,
mixing with the stains from childhood's tears.
The frail breast loses the human heartbeat,
as time erases the memory of a child's fears.

A smile remains frozen upon its lonely face,
softly weaving comfort into the weary air.
But the faulty human mind forgets
the love an old toy is willing to share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:26 PM
angie congratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Angie. Love, Carol
Tsiluma Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 2:04 AM
Oh the fate of childhood toys! Nicely done Angie. Congrats!
Taylor Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Congrats, Angie. Very touching. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Angie, congrats on your win..David
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Touching write, Angie. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 8:24 AM
My personal number one so far!! Light & Love Congrad's on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Congrats..this is a great take on the subject. I like!
Susan Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on your #2 win in my contest! I like how you described the toy, especially the dust fingerprints, and how we all eventually outgrow our toys and shelve them, sometimes forgetting the joy/love they used to give us :)
Pritts Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 8:07 PM
This was a good read with nice rhyme and imagery. I'm 48 and I still have my childhood teddybear. It never fails to bring a smile everytime I run across it in the closet. Thanks for writing.
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