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The Forever Dance

The musician tunes his instrument, preparing for the dance. The tall young man is ready, you can see it in his stance. Suddenly he spies his lovely lady, entering through the door. His heart begins to pound, as he crosses the ballroom floor. Bowing low in greeting, he offers her his hand. Her eyes return a smile, and the crowd begins to stand.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/7/2022 9:56:00 PM

Hi Ann, love to see a poet's first post, Especially yours, and i love it too.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2019 8:22:00 AM

I can feel this with all my heart! Beautiful!

Ann Foster
Date: 12/31/2019 10:18:00 AM

Thank you my kind friend. Merry Christmas and God Bless you and your family 2020.... Ann

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/20/2019 12:27:00 PM

BRAVO!!! Ann you are bringing the house down with this one. Thanks.

Ann Foster
Date: 11/20/2019 3:05:00 PM

You are too kind. Thank you. Ann

Bobby May

Date: 10/27/2019 4:18:00 PM

Well done Ann, love to read the first poems this one was very impressive my friend!

Ann Foster
Date: 10/27/2019 4:22:00 PM

Blush. Thank you my friend. This one has ever been one of my favorites. I am so honored to say, it has also been used in a dozen weddings and anniversary celebrations. It was a gift to write, and it keeps giving, which is "Him" shinning... He loves weddings... Ann

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/27/2019 10:02:00 AM

An excellent write Ann. I enjoyed the read.~Caryl

Ann Foster
Date: 10/27/2019 4:20:00 PM

Thank you for coming by my friend. Your words are so welcome. Ann

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/21/2019 10:19:00 AM

You are not small. ;0)

Ann Foster
Date: 10/27/2019 4:19:00 PM

Hugs!!! Ann

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/27/2019 9:18:00 AM

What a beautiful first poem for the soup. A belated welcome. You are already fitting in quite nicely.

Ann Foster
Date: 7/27/2019 7:03:00 PM

Thank you so much. Finding the soup was like finding a buffalo nickel in an old purse. Wow! Thank you for the fitting in part. I feel I am small among giants... Ann

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/7/2019 5:20:00 PM

Hello Anne,what an honor to be the first on the dance floor. I like this poem. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2019 5:58:00 PM

God bless you Ann. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Ann Foster
Date: 7/7/2019 5:54:00 PM

The bride, the groom, the dance, begins everything. People just don't know they dance and dance, the music just changes as the year's pass. Thank you for your kind remarks. You are always welcome to pass it along at a wedding, or anniversary. God Bless.