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The Follower

He stalks through the dark streets and lanes looking, searching for a victim seeing a likely women he follows for days he watches her routine Once satisfied he makes his plans then sets aside all he will need tomorrow is when he will act he takes pleasure thinking on it The following night he is there goes to the door rings her bell she opens it and is surprised quickly he ushers her inside Shaking in terror, do not hurt me is the tearful plea, she stutters no my dear you have it all wrong I was tasked to check you out You see you are now an heiress your grandfather leaves a fortune to who fills his will conditions I am pleased to say you do Now all you need to do is sign here and all his possessions are yours with a squeal she gave him a hug her saviour from drudgery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/22/2014 4:02:00 AM
Whoa Shadow! Didn't see that one coming! Very well written - gripping and fully captivating.
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Date: 1/20/2014 11:42:00 AM
Was he from Publishers Clearing House? LOL And the dream continues! Lucky for her, she doesn't have to buy anymore magazines. Yes, your poem took me on a side trip, which I enjoyed laughing about. Thanks for turning a dark day into laughter! Enjoyed your poem. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/20/2014 8:07:00 PM
ty Dane Anne pleased you enjoyed Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/20/2014 9:27:00 AM
Good morning Shadow.
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Date: 1/19/2014 3:32:00 PM
I thought it was a serial killer or rapist. Nice twist!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2014 5:47:00 PM
Ha ha. When you have a chance check out my latest poem.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/19/2014 4:27:00 PM
great Rick that is what you were supposed to think lol Shadow x smile hug

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