The Fog of Life

My cabin sits high upon the mountainside.
The rivers valley below both broad and wide;
An arboreal mist shrouds the land below;
As cold air rolls in, the white canopy grows;

Filling the valley up ever so slowly;
Climbing the mountainside thick wet foliage;
Mother Nature’s own scheme for hiding the pines;
Acting in accordance with old Father Time;

The old goat tethered to a hundred-year oak;
Standing somewhere a mere ten feet below me;
His bell clanging, yet not one hair can I see;
Hidden in thick clouds as if he were cloaked;

I stretched out my arms, my hands I could see;
I look down at the ground, my feet still with me;
Fog can’t erase the deeds of my hands and feet;
Nothing can hide me from my own knows and toes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:26 PM
So enjoy what you've done with topic of fog, Kenneth! Such an unlikely-seeming topic for an award-winning poem. Wonderful! Thanks, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Love: the arboreal mist, The old goat tethered to a hundred-year oak, Fog can’t erase the deeds of my hands and feet./Great imagery! Great thoughts! Fave for me! ...Kim
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:24 PM
Hello Kenneth Cheney, right you are. We can not hide. have a nice day my friend.
Cheney Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Thanks Darlene, nice to hear from you.
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