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The Fog of Life

My cabin sits high upon the mountainside. The rivers valley below both broad and wide; An arboreal mist shrouds the land below; As cold air rolls in, the white canopy grows; Filling the valley up ever so slowly; Climbing the mountainside thick wet foliage; Mother Nature’s own scheme for hiding the pines; Acting in accordance with old Father Time; The old goat tethered to a hundred-year oak; Standing somewhere a mere ten feet below me; His bell clanging, yet not one hair can I see; Hidden in thick clouds as if he were cloaked; I stretched out my arms, my hands I could see; I look down at the ground, my feet still with me; Fog can’t erase the deeds of my hands and feet; Nothing can hide me from my own knows and toes.

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Date: 2/8/2020 9:26:00 PM
So enjoy what you've done with topic of fog, Kenneth! Such an unlikely-seeming topic for an award-winning poem. Wonderful! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 2/8/2020 9:30:00 AM
Love: the arboreal mist, The old goat tethered to a hundred-year oak, Fog can’t erase the deeds of my hands and feet./Great imagery! Great thoughts! Fave for me! ...Kim
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Date: 2/5/2020 2:24:00 PM
Hello Kenneth Cheney, right you are. We can not hide. have a nice day my friend.
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Kenneth Cheney
Date: 2/8/2020 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, nice to hear from you.

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