The Fly Catcher's Shadow

After the great disappearance ----
                      Confusion and death ---
                           --- Will ---
Spread across every land -----------
                                         --- Like a great shadow ---
And fear----------------
             Will fill the hearts --
                            Of brave men --
                                    --- Who suddenly realize  ---
That they ----------
              Along with many ---
                               They love ---
                                       --- Have been left behind ---
And the emptiness that follows --
                  Consumes ---
                                --- The hearts of everyone ---
And up out of the darkness -----
                                          There shall rise ---
                                                    --- A true leader of men ---
Who will cast blinders ----
                          On the truth ---
                                   And he will deceive ---
                                      --- The people ---
Just as the Flycatcher -----
                       --- Deceives the fly ---
And just as the fly ---
                      Will no doubt ---
                                      Be led into death ---
                                                    So shall the souls ---
                                             --- Of those who follow ---
The Flycatcher’s shadow ---
               Into ---
      The time of peace ---
                         That will come ---
                                     At the price of freedom ---
                -------- And the entire world will be united as one --------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/13/2009 6:04:00 AM
I am reading this poem a second time because the buzzing structure haunted my mind. Cleverly done.
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:05:00 AM
You do Nostradamus proud, man. Yet you tell the truth, for the people are flies indeed before the spiders web, saddled with needs and then tempted by greed, all of which the leaders feed.
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Date: 3/4/2009 9:11:00 PM
All I can say is WOW! I loved the way it is written and the imagery.
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Date: 2/25/2009 6:35:00 PM
Freedom is a state of mind. We can live in a free world and still not be free. I liked this one. Vince
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Date: 2/18/2009 1:15:00 PM
I think many a fly will be caught at the price of freedom. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/16/2009 7:32:00 PM
mj, I think this is my favorite of all the poems I've read from your library. Very powerful! We can only hope the world will unite one day, and you expressed yourself so well! Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2009 6:55:00 PM
a wonderful free verse write .....very nice
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Date: 2/16/2009 3:27:00 PM
Nice write. Sounds like a warning to me also. Great message. Continue to share
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Date: 2/16/2009 1:50:00 PM
Wow! This a wonderful creative and different format for you. Powerful words make give the reader thoughts to ponder. Amazing poem! Thank you for sharing and for your ongoing encouragement. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 2/16/2009 10:34:00 AM
words that tell me the waning of justice for all ~ i am move to read a poem that feel so deeply for his fellow man/woman
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Date: 2/16/2009 4:18:00 AM
Nice form and structure Michael, great masterful work here. You gave up one addiction for another and this is writing my friend and you are great at it. Keep it up and may God continue to bless you and your family endlessly. You're in my Fav's also...Raul
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Date: 2/15/2009 10:11:00 PM
wow absoluetly amazing. wow, wow, wow. layout was fantastic and it flows so well. it seems like the words were meant to be together.
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Date: 2/14/2009 11:09:00 PM
Very impressive write. A lot of truth there. I love the written form.
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Date: 2/14/2009 12:19:00 PM
Wow! Great poem! the layout, adds to the entire base line. Thanks for all the comments. Best wishes. ~Jen~
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:56:00 AM
Hi Michael... "Ominous" is the only word I can find to describe the prophetic mood of this poem... great layout ! Thanks for your comments Michael.. Col
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:36:00 AM
Excellent work here, Michael! Great imagery and lots of depth runs through this. The format adds beautifully to this write! Have a Happy Valentines Day! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:11:00 AM
Dear Michael, such a compelling verse! I hope we have found a true leader who does not deceive in our new president. You mentioned "the price of freedom." That price is greater than many know. Please check out "Mideast Military Madness." And thanks for your comments on "Lovers on Valentine's Day." Best wishes - Carolyn
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Date: 2/14/2009 10:10:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Great wisdom and truth displayed here with such a unique format. Loved the title, that's what drew me in..Very intriguing and creatively written..Nicely done Michael, God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 2/14/2009 9:18:00 AM
WOW! GREAT FORMAT! AND a great truth. i understand. janetta
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Date: 2/14/2009 8:37:00 AM
this is a wonderful write!..I love the form and how u displayed it is just great..Happy valentines day....Marysm*
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:19:00 AM
This write is excellent...I love the style, and how your write had that falling feeling, this is very good.....always, Christy...HAPPY VALENTINES DAY
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:10:00 AM
Well done Michael..this is an awesome write..great work.
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:05:00 AM
Inventive lay out and presentation , MJ ... The last line , could be from a John Lennon song ..
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Date: 2/14/2009 3:01:00 AM
I really think this is a fine piece of work, I love the way you have laid it out as it captures the feeling of fear and anticipation. Thank you for your comments on my valentine poem. No I am definitely not a tour guide and if I were I think I might be out of work soon with the state of the economy. Regards: Déirdre
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:23:00 AM
Micheal loved this piece! at the price of freedom...beautiful... and thank you for your comments on my poems!! ~ Arany
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