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The Fly

THE FLY Really quite streamlined Wings spread back in uniform V Vector unimaginable The tiny fellow is indomitable Loves all sorts of pastry fruit meat Alas everything! Fortunately I am much oversized All he can do is taste And so – much better to have other food at the table There is an Indian burial ground – “The Mounds” Way north In Canada where They say some have been eaten alive where They come at you in swarms One lad went to the Mounds in shorts Was found two minutes later with a black suit on Chitababbawassee smiling down Distant drums You don’t worry about where he’s going It’s where he’s been You worry about those microscopic particles on your cinnamon roll Perhaps something already digested? He will linger on a plate Seemingly watching you With those electric green eyes You can almost hear him say “When da big one go off fool We still gonna be around We gots relatives underground”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/9/2010 6:53:00 PM
no oblay espanol-si? Just southern gal...
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:45:00 PM
Now I'm left wondering why I am only coming across this one now.. Love it Daver, btw going to have to google that song you were talking bout.. Got me curious hehe.. Love Wilma
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Date: 8/2/2010 8:57:00 PM
You would be an elephant eating nuts and plants How funny. Is there any animal that likes doritos and watching tv? OH, a MONKEY. That is ME.
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:21:00 PM
No way DAVER> A Pretty awesome Write.-SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2010 7:37:00 PM
AHA, the one you already showed me. YOu are really writing a lot lately, Daver. I am proud of you. Stay off that fool facebook and you will accomplish mucho! Good writing. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/1/2010 3:29:00 AM
Glad that you wrote one about the fly...Those nasty little creatures..How far can a fly fly? That was the question asked at talk given to us about sanitation in a job that I was doing one time working with youth in 4-H Club.. The answer is at least 20 miles...So it is true that one can not know where that fly has been...Good job...Sara
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:19:00 PM
Very good write Dave. Was interesting all the way through. It reminded me of some of the tales sitting around a boy scout campfire. I especially like the ending. Good imagination. Charles
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:08:00 PM
interesting,, the ending is like an Indian talking ,,or ha ha ha me and my slang...Yes I do believe them rascal old flyare around no matter what...Those little maggots,,,enjoyed your story Daver,,haha even if your Indians trew me off...p.d.
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