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For April National Poetry Month Poetry Contest sponsored by Daniel Henry Rodgers

 

The Fly

Day 1

I sit to write in peaceful solitude,
while words of tranquil elegance exude
visions of nature's beauty and soft light,
but it's not my muse which has taken flight. 
A bastard housefly sails a curvy path,
as irritation grows to rage and wrath.
Essentially, the reason is because
this little jerk emits a galling buzz.
When I think the skumbag's finally stopped,
and I could hear it if a pin were dropped,
the excrement eating insect starts again,
an insidious attack upon my brain.
You would not think a creature who is this small 
could find a way to bother me at all,
and yet he drives me completely daft and nuts,
until upon my window, I see his guts. 

Day 2

Awaking from a frightful fever dream,
I hear a buzz, and choke down a helpless scream.
The window guts, a subconscious, wishful scene,
before I slept, I missed with the magazine.
One slight move, he's no longer stationary.
Have I misjudged this pint-size adversary?
His flight is like 3-D billiards in the halls,
bouncing off unseen, invisible walls.
Why has this beast chosen me to torment,
to lead me in my sanity's descent
to Hell, a place I would gladly send him
if my worthless Westways could only rend him.
Yet, I said, "fly to the screen door, for once,
and we'll both be free, you insectoid dunce".
A desperate jack o'lantern, I am hollow.
Everywhere I go, he seems to follow. 
Perhaps, the little guy has something to say,
tracing the 3-D model of DNA.
Does he buzz the hundred thirty-seventh psalm?
Could it be that last week, I killed his mom?

Day 3

Hopefully, I think the fly's diminished,
and that soon this monster will be finished.
He seems to be flying slowly like he's drunk.
His decibel measure significantly shrunk.
He's fast and young, but he's aging faster,
giving me the better odds to plaster
him. Who will be victorious in the end?
On whose nerves are made of steel, it will depend.

Day 4

Dead on the floor, two haggard creatures lay.
In one's hand, "you're just like a summer's day".
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Carmack Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 4:38 PM
This is hilarious. I especially liked "Does he buzz the hundred thirty-seventh psalm? Could it be that last week, I killed his mom"? I use a butterfly net to catch them in my house and release them outside. Their lifespans are so short. Congrats on your win in Daniel's contest.
Crandall Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 6:36 PM
That's nice to hear - glad you liked it! I should try a butterfly net. I've never used them. Then, I could be a little kinder to our friend, the fly. I'm that way with spiders, I escort them outside the house, or I just co-exist with them, as I think they're pretty much ok. Flies - I don't like 'em!
Woods Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 5:54 PM
Such a great tale David! I loved the psychological horror aspect and clever ,witty way you crafted this! Congratulations on placing and thank you so much for sharing! You are always a fav writer for me! Xo
Crandall Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 7:10 PM
Thanks Crystol! I know it wasn't too scary, but I had no choice, because believe it or not, I didn't have to use my imagination at all, as this was a true story, and all I could think about was the fly. The only poetic license that I took was that I got him on day 3!
Greenhough Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Cute and funny. I've had terriers that keep the kitchen free of flies. I hope the nightmares go away. Good luck with the contest.
Greenhough Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 12:09 PM
He was probably exhausted.
Crandall Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:55 AM
Thanks Hilda. In real life, I got the fly on day 3.
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