The Fly

Bug lands In my soup Nasty insect Uninvited swimmer I’m ill!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Oh my. it's a good way to get a new soup if you are at a restaurant!
Kiser Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Yes and I did.
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:24 PM
M.L., i like this form and you did justice to it...no flies for me, ever... huggs
Kiser Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thank you.
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