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The Flutter

A slice of soft sun Plays on your warm morning cheek Flutter in the creek ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1st May 2016, Kolkata

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Date: 5/3/2016 12:52:00 PM
This could easily have been a haiku, Probir. I can see the image you present; the end line is great! [note...no caps in haiku and senryu...] ~~ Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/6/2016 6:41:00 AM
Thanks and regards. Thanks for the instructive and therefore helpful note.
Date: 5/1/2016 5:23:00 PM
interesting poetry mate
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/1/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thank you fellow poet....

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