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The Flower of Youth

a playground’s laughter fragrant in its innocence- jasmine soothes old ears whispered through a seasoned brier the perfumed blooms of childhood 02 Apr 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/22/2022 1:15:00 PM
Nostalgic and beautiful!
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Date: 4/18/2015 2:34:00 PM
Nice win David.. DP
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:14:00 PM
:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT
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Date: 4/14/2015 5:36:00 AM
congratulations David.....Seren
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Date: 4/9/2015 11:56:00 PM
big congrats on your win, dear poet!!
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Date: 4/8/2015 12:45:00 PM
This is perfectly beautiful tanka, David. Congratulations on your top win! Kim :)
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Date: 4/7/2015 7:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win! A Beautiful Tanka.
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Date: 4/7/2015 5:53:00 PM
Very beautifully written, David. A write deserving of top spot. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:54:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:34:00 PM
David, congratulations on this descriptive tanka win and a 7. Blessings
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Date: 4/7/2015 4:12:00 PM
Way to go David, well done and well deserved top spot.
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Date: 4/7/2015 3:46:00 PM
David, congratulations on your top of the podium win! Nice one on childhood. Sandra
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Date: 4/7/2015 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Imagine my surprise...NOT!
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Date: 4/7/2015 11:51:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2015 10:07:00 AM
Big congratulations on your top win, David! Have a great day. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/2/2015 9:58:00 PM
this is a very pretty one on childhood!
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:27:00 PM
wonderful imagery David:-) Hugs jan xx
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