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The Flower -part one-

“A Flowers Wilt” Witness the small existence that abides the beauty of----------- Freelancers all around, Just to get a good look. A baneful abrasion, the flower took It captivates you ------------- Reels you, steals from you, WAITING, Until you pick the right flawless touch. Dandelions swaying thin, Here we fall like petals. Ready to exploit, the beauty of------- Inhale the fragrance, Courtyard azure eyes, Embarking in a wishful eternity, A crush they become, when loveliness up and left. A bully against arrogant threw feminine perfumed veils Tulips waiting for the better auspicious sky Asters claim the eclipse's, -dinginess censors it from the brilliance of the sun. ~ A lonely rose In My Helix World- The out-and-out are born. Cries in the dimness, A sweet Lotus echo Slight yelps of agony carried off by pollen breeze. The earth revolves to fast, Injections of herbal essence in the wind For a split second, we feel pixie dust Channel the essential, it fades Earlier beauty, calmness- A flourish smile, Rusk of flower, a bluebird’s bread. Like candles and dew, they stream and limber energy Opposing others of its humanity, Against the command of its importance, Pierced by its own elegance, Thriving slowly of its own will, A short story, gone astray! Tonight, we plant a tree, The Flower wilts The gardener cries 03-06-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/1/2015 10:01:00 PM
Linda.. I loved your magnificent winning write, many congrats!
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:21:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write PD! Exquisite work!
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:25:00 PM
how poignant are your last two lines Linda congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:31:00 PM
AWESOME IS AWESOME DOES :)
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:26:00 PM
wonderful imagery linda - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:56:00 PM
Life to Death, awake to dream, touch to hold. This is what I think and feel from this Art. " pierced by it's own elegance..." J.A.B.
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:07:00 PM
I see this one won a contest and was posted last year or something? Lots of beautiful imagery, PD. I am sure I must have seen it before. I swear I have seen everything you have written!!!!
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Date: 4/18/2014 1:59:00 PM
You were so right LOL Nice one Linda
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Date: 12/26/2013 1:38:00 AM
congrats on the win, P.D. Have a great christmas and holidays :))
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Date: 12/24/2013 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
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Date: 12/21/2013 6:19:00 PM
Very beautiful imagery in this deep piece of poetry. I love it! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 12/20/2013 11:48:00 AM
this is stunningly lovely Linda fav congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/20/2013 7:00:00 AM
It is so wonderful to see that you won. I loved your poem Linda, I enjoyed every sentence...Congratulations...Hugs always....Roger
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Date: 12/20/2013 4:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, Linda
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Date: 12/19/2013 8:52:00 PM
Awesome to me... Thanks Giorgio.... PD
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Date: 12/19/2013 8:35:00 PM
Beautiful, Linda! Congrats!
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Date: 12/19/2013 6:21:00 PM
Totally awesome from beginning to ending Linda...congratulations..
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Date: 12/19/2013 4:34:00 PM
Never fail to amaze, this is really a gorgeous work :D congrats on your win Linda, :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/19/2013 11:44:00 AM
great write PD..I love the 4th stanza...congrats on the win
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:08:00 AM
Congrats Linda!
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Date: 10/23/2013 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2013 6:20:00 PM
I love this poem, Linda! I especially love the last two lines. They sum up this poem perfectly. Beautifully written! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you, once again, for the great comments, my friend! :)
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:58:00 PM
love the way I ended this poem.. LOL.. is that strange or what??? thanks for the win... :) PD
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:15:00 AM
This poem is so very beautiful pd..Its so sad when the rose dies and so strong the bond between gardener and she..He cries..Very beautiful dear
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:50:00 PM
This work is awesome!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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