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The First Time Ever

The cool refreshing breeze on a summer's eve After a bright, sunshiny day It's like the refreshing scent of a beautiful woman While she cuddles up close to you and sighs, “I love you” Two of the truly ultimate joys this life has to offer We lose all sense of time and place We live in that moment of sheer ecstasy When the world and it's petty problems cease to exist A divine moment in time that is etched in our memory Like no other, this moment is a once in a lifetime encounter Our first ever expression of love while we're young As we age and reach the different stages of life There will be many moments of divine pleasure But none so memorable as that very first time All of a sudden life has dramatically more meaning The childish games we played no longer fill our thoughts They're replaced by visions of love There is nothing else in life that equals that first ever time We realize what this big beautiful world is all about It's LOVE, sweet sweet LOVE © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 11/22/2014 1:30:00 PM
For Dragon love is the first time... He saw Santa Claus and sat on his lap! After that, Dragon was too big to sit on Santas lap... But he still loves Santa, who's responsible for bringing him so much! Grandpa Troll says Santa helped him pick out who Dragons' egg was given too. Boy! I must have been REALLY naughty that year! And Dragon loves his Jack because he's SURE... Jack is Santa's avatar name, and he's sure his Jack will continue giving him many presents, at Christmas, for many more years.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2014 5:09:00 PM
For many years now since my hair and beard turned white, wee ones approach me thinking I'm the guy! LOL Actually once in Florida, a little girl swam over to me in the pool and thought I was the real guy... I played along! XXX
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Carol Eastman
Date: 11/22/2014 1:34:00 PM
Actually, I HAVE tried to explain to Dragon that he's a bit confused... But Dragon always knows best... Besides I like thinking Jack is Santa in disguise... That sounds so cool!... Don't worry Santa Jack... We always help with that present thing!And a Ho! Ho! Ho! Merry Christmas. (Right after Thanksgiving... that is Thursday)... LOL Don't want to jump the gun.
Date: 11/22/2014 12:43:00 PM
beautifully penned my dear brother jack - I have a couple of recent poems you may like - look for Shakespeare and Santa in the titles lol :-) hugs Jan xxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2014 5:05:00 PM
Read "Santa is Coming"... naughty but nice! LOL Fun dear sis! XXX
Date: 11/22/2014 10:04:00 AM
Well said my friend -- here's to sweet love, may we always recognize it and embrace it deeply. All the best.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2014 11:25:00 AM
I still remember my first kiss... zoweeeeeee! How mind blowing was that!!!!

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