The First Rains Fly

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the first drops of rain. fly in the air on a wing. the case of wagtail.

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Date: 1/20/2022 3:16:00 PM

Clever one Lasaad, who’d of thought such a spectacle even exists, but it does because you just brought it to life, outstanding haiku, cheers David

Date: 1/20/2022 3:14:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Lasaad and love the pic. God Bless, JB

Date: 1/20/2022 1:10:00 PM

sweet one!!

Date: 1/20/2022 11:48:00 AM

Very nice Lasaad. Great to see this today :)

Date: 1/20/2022 10:26:00 AM

Enjoyed this one Lasaad, you compose these so well. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Date: 1/20/2022 7:45:00 AM

- Each line has a unique description ... excellent, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 1/20/2022 12:21:00 AM

This was cleverly done, Lasaad.

Date: 1/19/2022 8:55:00 PM

With a propelling force, everything gets wings and fly ! A haiku of deep meaning...

Date: 1/19/2022 8:23:00 PM

Lively and vivid! I enjoyed this very much, Lasaad. :)