Elizabeth Kinch Poet Free verse

The First Kiss

You took my hand,
Warm fingers embracing mine.
Leaves of luminescent green formed a canopy above,
While crystalline waters tumbled over rocks
Producing a mellifluous and iridescent display.

Our eyes met,
Love radiating between us.
An evanescent breeze momentarily stirred in the trees,
As if the angels, in anticipation, had drawn near
To bear testimony to the conflating of souls.

You pressed your lips against mine,
Emotions cascaded in ecstasy.
Celestial light, saturated the idyllic paradise
As Mother Nature sighed and the angels rejoiced
At the first kiss.

3rd September 2019

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Hello There September 5, 2019 at 9:35 PM Wow, thank you for sharing this beautifully intimate, perfectly romantic, spiritual experience! With an image so clear, we are left rejoicing with the angels :) (or sighing in envy... ;) Elizabeth Kinch September 6, 2019 at 3:43 AM Wow, thank you for such a lovely comment.

Brenda Chiri September 3, 2019 at 4:43 PM Willow so very nice!;) sweet too! Enjoyed this very much!;)

Ronald D Thompson September 3, 2019 at 1:10 PM 'Nail on head' Elizabeth. You've captured the emotion perfectly. Wonderfully penned. Best wishes....Ron xx Elizabeth Kinch September 3, 2019 at 1:32 PM Thank you so much Ron and best wishes to you.

Chris Green September 3, 2019 at 12:47 PM Sigh, such a delightful romantic piece of poetry filled with the excitement and affection that comes with that very first kiss. Beautifully written Elizabeth Chris Green September 3, 2019 at 1:13 PM That makes me smile. :) Elizabeth Kinch September 3, 2019 at 12:57 PM Chris, you inspired me to use some of the lovely poetic language you use in your poetry.

Tom Cunningham September 3, 2019 at 12:33 PM Lovely romantic verse Elizabeth, who can ever forget that first kiss. Tom Elizabeth Kinch September 3, 2019 at 1:33 PM Thank you Tom for commenting, I enjoyed writing it.