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The First Kiss

You took my hand, Warm fingers embracing mine. Leaves of luminescent green formed a canopy above, While crystalline waters tumbled over rocks Producing a mellifluous and iridescent display. Our eyes met, Love radiating between us. An evanescent breeze momentarily stirred in the trees, As if the angels, in anticipation, had drawn near To bear testimony to the conflating of souls. You pressed your lips against mine, Emotions cascaded in ecstasy. Celestial light, saturated the idyllic paradise As Mother Nature sighed and the angels rejoiced At the first kiss. 3rd September 2019

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Date: 9/5/2019 9:35:00 PM
Wow, thank you for sharing this beautifully intimate, perfectly romantic, spiritual experience! With an image so clear, we are left rejoicing with the angels :) (or sighing in envy... ;)
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 9/6/2019 3:43:00 AM
Wow, thank you for such a lovely comment.
Date: 9/3/2019 4:43:00 PM
Willow so very nice!;) sweet too! Enjoyed this very much!;)
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Date: 9/3/2019 1:10:00 PM
'Nail on head' Elizabeth. You've captured the emotion perfectly. Wonderfully penned. Best wishes....Ron xx
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 9/3/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Ron and best wishes to you.
Date: 9/3/2019 12:47:00 PM
Sigh, such a delightful romantic piece of poetry filled with the excitement and affection that comes with that very first kiss. Beautifully written Elizabeth
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Chris Green
Date: 9/3/2019 1:13:00 PM
That makes me smile. :)
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 9/3/2019 12:57:00 PM
Chris, you inspired me to use some of the lovely poetic language you use in your poetry.
Date: 9/3/2019 12:33:00 PM
Lovely romantic verse Elizabeth, who can ever forget that first kiss. Tom
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 9/3/2019 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Tom for commenting, I enjoyed writing it.

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