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The first day of Spring

O listen the schenaries of both worlds, The heavens have again come to our Earth For even the forbidden creatures have join us to rejoice All to celebrate the praises of this Holy Spring On the first of the spring, the whole horizon is filled with happiness The birds start to sing their melodies, a robin singing with slight naughtiness You can again see the leaves, auburn and golden in dim sun rays Giving all objects a lilac hue and shining responsive to moon's gaze Today, I have seen the beauty of this marvelous tree Which is neither of West nor of East, In Spring, it shines just like the light of a niche With in it is a lamp, and the lamp is inside the glass The glass as if it is a white glistening star Blessed by the oil of the heavens itself,bright just like a illuminated night Which will glow even if touched by fire, light shall be upon light
15 lines For the contest" March Poems" Sponsor" Carolyn Devonshire"

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Date: 8/16/2019 4:00:00 PM
Nice one
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Date: 8/8/2019 3:39:00 PM
Great poem waiting for other one like this
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Date: 8/4/2019 5:23:00 PM
well written and facts based you deserve to win
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:28:00 PM
Not bad my friend.
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Date: 3/10/2019 1:26:00 PM
So lovely, Faraz. I see this is on the winners' list from congrats below. Belated congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/10/2019 11:25:00 AM
Faraz, such a beautifully penned poem, you have the talent of a poem, keep writing and this must go in my FAV's
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:09:00 PM
The Persians/Iranians call the first day of spring Nowruz or Norooz. The entire winter we plan and on the first day of spring we celebrate and dance and we do not stop for 13 days... Thank you for reminding me. Best of luck...
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Date: 3/3/2019 9:14:00 PM
Love your poems as well as your comments you have made on others poems to stimulate them.
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Date: 2/28/2019 1:30:00 AM
Amazing poem! I am rooting for you!
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful image of spring :)
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Date: 2/25/2019 8:04:00 AM
This is beautiful Faraz! Congratulations on your win my friend.Have a great week!
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:48:00 PM
Stupendous images of spring.
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Date: 2/22/2019 9:15:00 PM
What a wonderful well descriptive write, Faraz. I love the phrases,"O listen the schenaries of both worlds, and it shines just like the light of a niche"... Good luck in the contest. Dear friend
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:33:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2019 8:49:00 AM
such lovely imagery Faraz, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/19/2019 5:25:00 PM
You have some very interesting images of spring, Faraz. Your poem would have ranked higher, but "join" in line three should have been "joined" and in the last verse "With in" should have been written as one word "Within." There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2019 3:35:00 PM
Great lines Faraz..
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Date: 2/17/2019 11:07:00 AM
Beautiful writing and so uplifting!
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Date: 2/17/2019 7:10:00 AM
Well written Faraz! :)
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