Balveen Cheema Poet Imagism

The Final Srokes

The Final Strokes

The many hued sparklers were dappling the almost cindered sky
Turning the sunset from gilded gold to ochery orange.
Michael Angelo's brushes were yet busy with his final strokes
Of separating light and darkness on his beautiful dusky ceiling.
My feasting eyes drifted from the sun's rosy dome 
To the soul that wonder'd at the creation of our Creator
'Tis always joy for the sunny eyes ablaze with deliberate  bewitchment.




(Earlier-July 8, 2015
Contest: The Answer)

February 27, 2016
Contest:Any Poem#36
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 8:54 PM Thanks for the reply, Balveen....Linda

Anisha Dutta March 13, 2016 at 10:49 AM Congrats Balveen for the nice piece. Best Wishes . Anisha D Balveen Cheema March 15, 2016 at 8:32 PM Thanks Anisha!

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2016 at 10:20 AM Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Balveen Cheema March 15, 2016 at 8:30 PM Thanks Linda & wish you the best in your new home!

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Lovely imagery. Congrats on the winners' list. Balveen Cheema October 18, 2015 at 7:32 AM Andrea, it's never too late to express gratitude! Glad you loved the imagery! Love, Balveen

Alexis Y. August 18, 2015 at 7:46 AM Balveen, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your awesome win:-) Alexis Balveen Cheema August 19, 2015 at 7:58 AM Thanks Alexis!

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:20 PM Balveen. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT Balveen Cheema August 19, 2015 at 8:00 AM I often think on the same lines when I watch the sunset. Thanks Skat!