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The Final Srokes

The Final Strokes The many hued sparklers were dappling the almost cindered sky Turning the sunset from gilded gold to ochery orange. Michael Angelo's brushes were yet busy with his final strokes Of separating light and darkness on his beautiful dusky ceiling. My feasting eyes drifted from the sun's rosy dome To the soul that wonder'd at the creation of our Creator 'Tis always joy for the sunny eyes ablaze with deliberate bewitchment. (Earlier-July 8, 2015 Contest: The Answer) February 27, 2016 Contest:Any Poem#36 Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 8:54:00 PM

Thanks for the reply, Balveen....Linda

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/13/2016 10:49:00 AM

Congrats Balveen for the nice piece. Best Wishes . Anisha D

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:32:00 PM

Thanks Anisha!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 10:20:00 AM

Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:30:00 PM

Thanks Linda & wish you the best in your new home!