The Final Say

As our world spins into this blatant madness Family units like dead leaves, fading fast! Our children lost, good values tossed Idols abound, keeps us in a choke! Excesses, extreme shape our lives The Golden Rule, now a corny joke! A simple guide to can heal our earth-disregarded Yet, in spite of all these, God will have the final say When wars and storms sweep across our earth Leaders ignore the hour at hand Perhaps, the last to stand as men To right the wrongs of history past And re enact laws to seal the cracks! Potent winds arising, already on track Remember, love for man and nature will heal this earth Yes, I believe, in spite of all these, My God will have the final say So let the politicians, argue, fight and scheme Let the liars, deceivers, play their games!” Let death merchants chant their evil anthem “It’s not a child, but a piece of flesh”! While the years like pages torn from a book All blowing away like dust in the wind Gone forever beyond eternity's veil! 'Too simplistic', some claim, that love's the remedy Yet, in spite of all these, I will fear no end, for My God will have the final say! ~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/26/2010 3:27:00 AM
Another brilliant write you've penned here, Audrey! Have a nice one!...Gert:)
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Date: 10/25/2010 2:31:00 PM
"Love for man and nature will heal this Earth." Yes! that's what it will take and we are so far from it. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:24:00 PM
My, my, my...everytime I think you have said it all, you come back with something more striking. This is absolutely amazing!! Love it 100%. Thanks for your comments and for always reading my writes...yes I am back from Jamaica...had a God blessed time with family and friends...thanks for enquiring. Luv you much, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:57:00 PM
Very inspirational with that last line my friend.. only HE will have all under control as many things are in chaotic state... with God on our side we triumph... spread the Word and rely and trust in it... fantastic message my friend.. appreciate your very sweet comments today ...forever your BBF..
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:43:00 PM
Smile ~ "Yes," again, for All concerned, "Love," is going to become the final deciding factor I do believe...."Beautiful Painting & Poe, 'From The Soul;' A Fave" ~ "Thank You" for "Your Beauties" lovely message & coms ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'Dear, Precious Audrey Carey,' Upon The Pages Still To Be Written By, 'The Hands, of Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful One!":) ~
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:40:00 PM
Wow. Yes God will have the final say. the is an excellent piece I think one for me fav file.
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:29:00 PM
Smile ~ "Yes, 'The God of All Creation' Shall Have The Final Say &, 'He Is Love!!!'" ~ I John 4:8 ~ "Pure, Sincere & Undefiled, 'Through & Through' & Yet Upon The Other Hand, 'He Is A Consuming Fire!!!'" ~ Hebrews 12:29 ~ Smile, I read this amazing poe "Dear, 'Beautiful & Precious, Audrey Carey,'" three times &, "I Loved It" although, my eyes have for a bit now it seems my dear, been humbly & yet truly placed upon the entire picture of it all but ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 10/24/2010 1:49:00 PM
Excellent, Audrey! Indeed, only love can help remedy all of the problems you describe. The loss of family values is a major part of the problem. I may be naive, but I think children who are raised in loving homes by attentive parents are the hope for our future, dear. This is brilliant in concept and execution. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2010 1:20:00 PM
Audrey brilliantly said and so much wisdom too. Love this write of yours ;) missed you too, had a busy weekend - love Wilma
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Date: 10/24/2010 1:00:00 PM
Very powerful thoughts penned on the current day affairs with a great faith on the final say, Audrey
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:45:00 PM
I'm no religious dude Audrey, but I like the wisdom behind this gem of yours. If you do come to Scotland, visit Perthshire, the rugged West Coast and of course the beautiful Highlands >> James ;)
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:33:00 PM
Bravo!!!!!!!! well said....I love it...
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