The Field Mouse Came Calling

As I was strolling through the woods,
I saw him hiding there.
So quiet, meek and mild was he,
So sweet, I found him fair.

That evening by the campfire,
I spied him once again,
Sitting just outside the glow,
He tried hard to blend in,

And not be seen by firelight,
He came to guitar strum,
He timidly crept closer,
As to the tune I hummed.

Crouching there beside my knee,
The cutest little mouse,
Came to listen to my song,
And grace me and my spouse,

With his quiet company,
For he was all alone,
And I felt blessed to have him come,
For people oft are prone,

To screech and rave about a mouse,
Or something they think vermin,
This tiny little thing of God's,
Did not so me determine.

                                      Judy Ball


We so often miss out on a blessing because we fear something or sonsider it beneath us.
Once on a camping trip as I sat strumming my guitar by the fire, a little field mouse came into the camp and cuddled by my knee as I knelt on the ground with my guitar.
I felt so honored that he came. He must have been terribly lonely or cold or hungry or something to trust us that way.
He came to the soothing music I guess.
When I moved he scurried away and I felt I'd somehow lost something special.
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August 19, 2011 at 11:27 PM
Thanks so much James. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Foulk Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 9:57 PM
in the last week we have caught three mice in a mouse trap, i hate to see them die, but if they start having babies you are talking about 20 for each mother. this was a great piece your wrote and your love for all animals like mine shows everytime you write. thank you for commenting on farewell for now soupers, and i hope not to be gone long, but i may be gone for good,don't yet.
Ball Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Thanks so much James. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Wesley Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Just magic, the poem and explanation!
Ball Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Thanks so much Liz. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
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August 19, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Touching story Judy! You are so right with respect to nature, sometimes they are just curious of us or desires warmth, whatever the reason it is great if we just relax and allow them to come to us, to share moments with whatever animal(s). I would say there are a few that I might not want in my camp, bears, bobcats, wild hogs, and my favorite...skunks. This is a very awesome poem, so true! Thanks for sharing!!
Ball Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 8:08 PM
I agree my friend. There are some that if they came into camp I'm likely to let them have the camp. lol Thanks bunches. God Bless, JB
Onclaud Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 1:45 PM
oh, judy... creatures have a way of telling us how beautiful and sweet they are... a smashing piece made with love's poetic weave..:) hugggs, nette
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August 19, 2011 at 12:02 PM
oh, my gosh, how wonderful it would be to have a little mouse come sit by you like this. How interesting!! It reminds me of the video I saw of a woman on a beach and a sea lion came up to the beach and very slowly crept up to her and eventually ended up lying on top of her to cuddle. It was the coolest thing ever!
Ball Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 1:32 PM
That would indeed be so cool. What a blessing. God is so good and lets us have something like this once in awhile but some people are too dumb to know it's a blessing a get all scared and sometimes hurt the poor things. Thanks so much. Glad you liked this. God Bless, JB
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August 19, 2011 at 10:21 AM
great words for your footnote Judy following your poem.. we are not given a spirit of fear but of power and luv and a sound mind.. so I stand on that a lot.. wonderful perspective on the mouse ..in your lines.. and congrats on your 45 years of wedded bliss.. don't know if we will make it that long but treasure every day ..luv..
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:30 AM
No, it's not lost and it is special. Tony
Ball Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Thanks so much Tony. I thought it was too. God Bless my friend. JB
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