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The Field At Sunset

Here is a flowered field laid before me.
So vast and green,
it shimmers
like the
sea.
This
sea of
pretty green
swims in my eyes.
I’m drowning in sunset’s last yellow rays.

Sept. 28, 2020
for Eve Roper's 'Double Tetractys 4' Contest
I failed to submit this one in time for Eve's previous contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2021 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I love both. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2021 11:51:00 AM

Lovely image, Andrea. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 1/29/2021 10:53:00 AM

Beautiful Andrea!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/29/2021 8:46:00 AM

Soothing and enchanting! Congrats on your top win!

John Lawless

Date: 1/29/2021 5:42:00 AM

Ah, a scattering of dandelions amidst the beauty of this poem....beautifully done Andrea

Gary Radice

Date: 1/29/2021 3:26:00 AM

I would envisage the same sort of photo even if it hadn't been posted because of your words. Cheers - Gary

W.A. Cholt

Date: 10/27/2020 1:33:00 PM

Lovely evocative poem. Perfect background picture. One compliments the other beautifully.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/17/2020 6:04:00 AM

A lovely WINNING poem, Andrea! Janice

Howard Kerr

Date: 10/17/2020 1:56:00 AM

Andrea, Thanks for your return visit re Striking Image Catnap. Heartfelt congratulations on your podium place topper The Field at Sunset. A timeless classic. Well done Howard

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/16/2020 10:59:00 PM

Returning your congratulation for first placement in the contest. Very picturesque. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/16/2020 9:11:00 PM

Such a lovely scene is depicted here and it's so charmingly described. Congratulations on a well deserved win. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2020 7:45:00 PM

Andrea, it's a pleasure to return and offer my congratulations to you for your wonderful win in Eve's contest. Such beauty spills from your pen. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2020 8:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your admirable win poem, Andrea :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 10/16/2020 1:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement. :-) x

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/15/2020 7:24:00 PM

Awesome.... Congratulations on you win.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/15/2020 7:03:00 PM

Beautiful last line Andrea. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

JCB Brul

Date: 10/15/2020 6:31:00 PM

There is so much loveliness in this poem...My heart is abounding with joy upon reading this...Congratulations dear Andrea. Your ink is boundless! A FAVE for me..

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2020 6:18:00 PM

Andrea, such a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Howard Kerr

Date: 10/11/2020 2:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea, First and foremost thanks for your constructive and complimentary review of Striking Image Catnap. Your entry is above and beyond superb. Lovely sweep and flow Howard