The Fiddler and the Frog

A symphony in two part sound:
the fiddler and the frog
played echo in the fog,
a lovely analog.

Crescendoing as they redound,
with none to inhibit
the bow or the ribbit,
they simply ad-lib it.

Then, absent of all jealousies,
acknowledging their need,
they oft exchange the lead,
and neither does impede.

Across the water melodies:
the fiddler on her strings,
the frog, the baseline brings;
delight is given wings.

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for The Fiddler and the Frog Poetry Contest
sponsored by Craig Cornish
a Paulo Comitatu: 8:6:6:6 with abbb, accc, etc. 
written on 1/22/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Great poem! Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 1:58 AM
Back with congratulations!
Wolf Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 11:13 PM
Aw, this is great, Jeff. Unbounded joy and hoppity without the hippity. Love it. thanks, gw
George Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Indeed 'delight is given wings' reading this lovely poem. The 'concert' is so pleasant, both taking the lead in turn. All the best Jeff, in the contest.
Kyser Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Thanks, an interesting form to work with. Have a wonderful day!
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 9:10 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kyser Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Thanks, Sara - have a blessed day!
Bauer Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:56 AM
brilliant! love the way you've used rhyme here, jeff. my favorite is "inhibit - ribbit - ad lib it." so creative!
Kyser Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Thanks - an interesting form I ran across on poet's collective!
Pandit Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Awesome poetry, Jeff. A touch of intellect throughout.
Kyser Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Thanks so much for the read and the comments!
Miller Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 8:11 AM
I love it, should do very well in the contest
Kyser Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 5:11 AM
Thanks, Terry, and for the thoughtful soupmail!
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