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The Feral Me- My Spirit Animal

I praise myself- a 'feral' animal,
so like you, Elephant- majestic, wild;
your dedication to herd families
has influenced me since I was a child.

Like you, dear Elephant, instincts abound:
a mother, matriarch surely I am,
consumed with 'tribal' harmony, like you,
fierce guardian- yet, gentle as a lamb.

Brave elephant, devoted to a fault,
my sense of duty matches yours for sure.
Connected still, and leading when I can,
so that like you, my kindred will endure.

Like you, a power animal, I'm strong
for young ones of my 'herd', and elders too.
My mental 'tusks' plow through life's challenges
and make it easier to help them through.

My empathy and telepathic sense,
like you, attune me to familial needs.
Staunch Elephant, your deep connectedness
and cogent, native skills inspire my deeds.

As imitation mimics flattery,
you, Elephant, I've followed many ways.
Your species has survived billions of years;
that 'feral' part of me- mimes you in praise.


June 15, 2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: A Poem Honoring Spirituality Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
Judged: 05/07/2020

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Feral
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 08/10/2018

~2nd Place~
Contest: Favorite Animal In The World
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Judged: 06/04/2018

~9th Place~
Premiere Contest: Spirit Guides
Sponsor: White Wolf
Judged: 06/23/2017
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Date: 5/9/2020 12:34:00 AM
Awesome poem, Sandra. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 5/7/2020 12:34:00 PM
Congrats Sandra on your win!
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Date: 5/7/2020 10:13:00 AM
You have found so many ways to relate to your spirit animal with your strength, resilience, and fierce loyalty to family. Lovely in message, rhyme and flow. Well done, and congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 6/22/2019 8:08:00 PM
Your tender toughness shines in this amazing personification, Sandra. So many beautifully expressive lines like; 'My mental 'tusks' plow thru life's challenges' - such grand poetic imagery and a brilliant nod to your dear elephant. They are so inspiring as is your marvelous poem. Congratulations on another excellent win with this exceptional piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/12/2018 6:14:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again! Well done!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/13/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/11/2018 8:26:00 AM
Back with much deserved congrats, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/12/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/10/2018 6:07:00 PM
Beautifully done Sandra, we should all aspire to such heights...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/12/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 5/14/2018 3:29:00 PM
So perceptive and warm a write, Sandra--well-deserving of a trophy win. :) gw
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/14/2018 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, Gerson. I appreciate your supportive comments very much. Sandra
Date: 5/14/2018 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra! I enjoyed reading your poem of characteristic comparisons. A unique and profound poem
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/14/2018 7:06:00 PM
Hi, Susan. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and like the comparisons. Thanks so much for your visit and uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/14/2018 11:40:00 AM
I love the way you compared the elephant's qualities to your own motherly instincts. Superbly done, Sandra. Congrats on your well deserved podium win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/14/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thanks, Line, for your lovely comments and for the great contest. I appreciate my placement and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/24/2017 10:43:00 AM
Congrats!!! Sandra...beautiful as always...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/23/2017 9:17:00 PM
wow, I love yours, Sandra. You did yours kind of the way I did mine, relating the characteristics of the animal with your own personality. I was thinking I'd see more poems doing it that way. I love the elephant and it did not even enter my mind when I was thinking up elephants but I think its spirit is much like that of the small turtle!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/15/2017 9:46:00 PM
Nobility and honesty personified. Family first, what's not to admire...
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Date: 6/15/2017 5:42:00 PM
Mrs Sandra, it simply isn't fair for you to be so talented. I know I will always get a quality poem when I come to read. Good luck.
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Date: 6/15/2017 2:36:00 PM
Great choice and depiction of spirit animal. Elephants are awesome. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/15/2017 1:47:00 PM
Awesome write! You do this noble beast justice. Definitely an animal spirit to aspire to.
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