The Fens

Snipe and Curlew are skating on the mist
they sing of the water
that sky-water which sways to their songs.

Flat is this land with no coastal margins,
here I am the peak of a mountain
my coated form
darkly winged with strange desires,
an ardor compelled to rain down
upon these wandering streams,
to babble and pour in the Wash is my pleasure.

Osprey skim between the worlds
as they plow the brume and drizzle.
Silver trout dangle in the air
hooked by the wringing and the wet,
the taloned and the dunking beak.

You gandering Grebs where are you gone?
O yes, you are swimming a soaking river
betwixt the two poles of this sodden world,
you wade and paddle, dip with a breezy ease -
with dauntless sweeps you divide the oceans.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Skinner Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Great imagery. I can see your poem's environment and love it. Also "taloned and dunking beak", fun pic in my head. Bravo
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September 11, 2024 at 4:41 PM
Thank you for this encouraging comment BP. Best Eric
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