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The Feeling of the River

As i hear the trickles you make I close my eyes As i hear your stream I find my peace As i walk into your path My spine gets the chills As i feel your vibes I feel the passion you present As i open my eyes I see the beauty you share As i dive into your deepness I feel your cold presense As i rise to your surface I feel my heart slowing down As i see the rocks you form I swim to the nearest one As i climb myself up I feel the sun beat down on me As i sit on your rock I put my feet in your current As you run through my toes I release my stress As you continue your path I look down at you As i see my relflection I see myself in your light As you look into my soul I feel a tickle in my heart As your ripples began to grow My reflection fades away As your tides begin I stand up and close my eyes As you move so swiftly I listen to your sounds As you race around me The wind and you become one As i let go of the small things I raise my arms to both sides As the wind pushes me over I fall into your arms As you giude my direction I let you take me to a better place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 8:25:00 PM
DEVON, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:14:00 AM
Wow, this is going to my fav poems! You flow freely in the pool of passion with this piece...you may want to make few corrections, you 'i' should be in caps 'I'. This sound erotic though. It's great to read your piece this morning Mcgone, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke
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Date: 6/7/2013 1:33:00 PM
Hello Devon,. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/7/2013 11:22:00 AM
Devon, a lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:01:00 AM
Beautifully words you have penned here-- I could feel the momentum and flow of the river mirroring your emotions. The last two lines show deep emotion. Welcome to P/Soup
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