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The Feeling of Terror

Stop the screaming I'm hearing in my house Stop the sobs coming from my mouth The tears that were once happy are sad All because someone got him mad I can't run from the terror Cause it will only make his anger less rarer What am I suppose to do to get away from the pain All of this only makes me wish for me to be sane Pretend that the tears aren't real Pretend that my heart is fully healed But I'll just keep crying And maybe one day my life won't be so horrifying

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:23:00 PM

Raquel, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2016 2:37:00 AM

Good rant, Raquel. Welcome aboard. Skat