The Feather

The feather had started its life as part of a bird's plumage
until one day it was preened out and left on the ground
A warrior chief finding it added it to his headdress
where it rode into many bloody battles with him
until it was wrenched out by a tree's branches
trapped there fluttering in the light breeze
it was found by a man who took it for his wife
she added to her Sunday hat and wore it to church.

Starting to look very bedraggled she took it out
she was going to throw it away but her daughter
pleaded to be allowed to have it for her collection
and there it rested for many years as a trophy.
The feather had started life bright and jaunty
now in its last days it had faded and become shredded
I wonder what tales you could tell us, the lady thought
as with a sigh she took it outside and let the breeze take it.

written 08/05/2014

contest: LEAF, FEATHER, SHELL or FLAKE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Lovely, imaginative write, Shadow. Congratulations.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 9:00 AM
I enjoyed your feathers journey. Congrats Shadow.
Mehta Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on this fine narrative, Shadow. congrats
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 1:51 AM
impressive narrative, shadow.. applause to you!
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:21 PM
Shadow, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
Sietesantos Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations, Shadow on a beautiful win!!! I enjoyed reading this piece - excellent write! Warmest regards. Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:56 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Shadow, this was a very nice story!! I really like how you took the feather to so many places. Congrats for your win. soupmail.
Guzzi Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:31 PM
I love finding feathers there were a ton today? Most time none?Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Lovely write Shadow Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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