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The Feather

The feather had started its life as part of a bird's plumage until one day it was preened out and left on the ground A warrior chief finding it added it to his headdress where it rode into many bloody battles with him until it was wrenched out by a tree's branches trapped there fluttering in the light breeze it was found by a man who took it for his wife she added to her Sunday hat and wore it to church. Starting to look very bedraggled she took it out she was going to throw it away but her daughter pleaded to be allowed to have it for her collection and there it rested for many years as a trophy. The feather had started life bright and jaunty now in its last days it had faded and become shredded I wonder what tales you could tell us, the lady thought as with a sigh she took it outside and let the breeze take it. written 08/05/2014 contest: LEAF, FEATHER, SHELL or FLAKE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/19/2014 8:36:00 PM
Lovely, imaginative write, Shadow. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/18/2014 9:00:00 AM
I enjoyed your feathers journey. Congrats Shadow.
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Date: 8/18/2014 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine narrative, Shadow. congrats
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Date: 8/18/2014 1:51:00 AM
impressive narrative, shadow.. applause to you!
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:21:00 PM
Shadow, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Shadow on a beautiful win!!! I enjoyed reading this piece - excellent write! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:56:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:50:00 PM
Shadow, this was a very nice story!! I really like how you took the feather to so many places. Congrats for your win. soupmail.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:31:00 PM
I love finding feathers there were a ton today? Most time none?Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love
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Date: 8/5/2014 2:26:00 PM
Lovely write Shadow Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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