Barbara Gorelick Poet Haiku

The Fawn and the Fairy

evening shadows
softening the forest floor
one last sunbeam

sleeping fawn nestled
In his secret bower bed
unafraid of night

fairy queen watching
from her seat of spider webs
wiping away tears

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 21, 2012 at 9:04 AM Congrats on your wonderful win, Barbara! I love the beautiful imagery and fantasy you created. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2012 at 3:03 PM Such a descriptive and expressive work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2012 at 11:58 AM So cute it was, Barbara. Glad it's on the list. Congratulations.

Kim Merryman July 18, 2012 at 6:52 PM Barbara, congrats on your win with this creative write! Love, Kim

Joyce Johnson July 18, 2012 at 1:07 PM Very imaginative and lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

David Williams July 18, 2012 at 11:02 AM Barbara congrats on your win, excellent..David

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2012 at 9:35 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Kathryn Collins July 9, 2012 at 7:24 AM This is just so soft and lovely. I fell like I am watching from a cloud.

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2012 at 9:45 PM Is this for the beautiful picture contest? It certainly creates a pretty picture, sweetie.

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2012 at 9:21 PM Barbara, this is very nice...pd

Joseph May July 5, 2012 at 7:46 PM well woven delight of haikus Barbara.... Joseph

Kim Merryman July 5, 2012 at 7:18 PM Beautiful! I can easily picture the scene in my mind. Love, Kim

Gail Debole July 5, 2012 at 6:39 PM Beautifully and sensitively written. Very sweet.

Russell Sivey July 5, 2012 at 5:57 PM What a terrific write my friend! You described a very peaceful scene with your tender words! Awesome poem, Great Work!!