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The Fawn and the Fairy

evening shadows softening the forest floor one last sunbeam sleeping fawn nestled In his secret bower bed unafraid of night fairy queen watching from her seat of spider webs wiping away tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/21/2012 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Barbara! I love the beautiful imagery and fantasy you created. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/20/2012 3:03:00 PM
Such a descriptive and expressive work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2012 11:58:00 AM
So cute it was, Barbara. Glad it's on the list. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:52:00 PM
Barbara, congrats on your win with this creative write! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/18/2012 1:07:00 PM
Very imaginative and lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/18/2012 11:02:00 AM
Barbara congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Date: 7/18/2012 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:24:00 AM
This is just so soft and lovely. I fell like I am watching from a cloud.
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Date: 7/5/2012 9:45:00 PM
Is this for the beautiful picture contest? It certainly creates a pretty picture, sweetie.
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Date: 7/5/2012 9:21:00 PM
Barbara, this is very nice...pd
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Date: 7/5/2012 7:46:00 PM
well woven delight of haikus Barbara.... Joseph
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Date: 7/5/2012 7:18:00 PM
Beautiful! I can easily picture the scene in my mind. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/5/2012 6:39:00 PM
Beautifully and sensitively written. Very sweet.
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Date: 7/5/2012 5:57:00 PM
What a terrific write my friend! You described a very peaceful scene with your tender words! Awesome poem, Great Work!!
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