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The Fault Line

A fault line runs across the land from blue to red in angry lines accusing those who do not stand for views like theirs, in changing times. With shouts and cries, some march forth refusing outcomes, demanding change others "speak" by silent vote a different view, still freedom reigns. The fault line widens, a behemoth gap a frightening chasm across the states states, once United on the map are crumbling under a gigantic weight. This land needs understanding, unity to mend it's faults, a consensus, a common ground to preserve it's freedoms and put an end to hate that threatens to take our nation down. Written on 11/20/2016

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Date: 12/9/2016 1:38:00 PM
Indeed, true, and true to form. Cheers, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/16/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Doug. I appreciate your comments!
Date: 12/9/2016 12:37:00 PM
Very good ! So true! Congratulations Laura :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/9/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi :)
Date: 11/21/2016 9:03:00 AM
A great message ...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Probir. :)
Date: 11/21/2016 8:26:00 AM
This is a strong country, we will survive. The poem is spot on, fault lines indeed! They were already here before the election, we just felt them shift. Love the write, Laura:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2016 9:30:00 AM
I am concerned, but I agree..we can unite once again. Thanks for commenting, Daniel :)
Date: 11/21/2016 12:47:00 AM
a strong message so timely these days, laura... beautifully done!..huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thanks, Nette :)

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