The Fat Kid Now a Gym Addict

He grew up a fat kid
now a gym addict
can’t play sport though no good at it
thinks he’s worked hard while you had it natural
when really he’s doing what you did when at school
but it’s just the weights protein shakes 
and muscle relaxers for him
not the competitive contact sport constantly injuring 
it’s just losing fat and building muscle up 
he's finished growing too so he's building pressure up
causing problems that see life took
in vain training to have a superficial look
getting big without cardiovascular 
turning overweight fat to muscular 
the poor heart and lungs straining 
at a body to big to maintain
as they don’t really adapt to the new muscles he trains 
a pressure on the respiratory system cannot remain 
he's got the heart and lungs of a fat kid
building up muscle stack an obsessive habit
cus the foundation is layered during puberty
after which heart and lungs don't grow usually 
so forcing the heart too far when as huge as he
fuelled by fat kid issues making it about how he appears
he has a jealousy if you were healthy in your younger years
and now he appears to be healthy 
but the heart’s saying help me
it’ll hang on seemingly ok
but when it goes wrong,
that’s your life mate 
have a nice day.

Being healthy starts young with the lungs and the heart
if you’re older these two the most important parts 
build yourself up as strong as your heart is
or be someone too young to have since departed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ermine Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Incredibly astute observation. Well said, if kids start fat, they're forever on the back foot in terms of ongoing fitness. Superficiality sometimes seems the overarching motivation for the bulgiest buffest ones. Appears their muscles wouldn't recognise work in a real situation where grunt is required. Very well written description to tell all this and more.
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