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The Fanch-Interior with Women

Standing on my head looking up at the trees and the sparkling sky When it’s dark I don’t see the ship float by nor the tsunami sea Upside-down women on either side of cotton candy eventide When the light’s bright palms and ferns come to life tickling my soles and I am able to rearrange the houseplants with my toes How much harder it is to apprehend the tossed high heels and the mute parrot high and higher almost in flight but I catch them as I carry on with lethargic lids that never seam The minute I close them my baby-faced muse pries them open with a seam ripper and I flick the light back on and then to annoy her I hit the switch so I can view the “Fanch” in the Hitchcock hour Truly, I am reclining and in turn propelling out of my chair It’s been a long day I won’t bore you with its tales I’ll just point you to the simple fact that artwork looks different hanging upside-down or inside-out or Cubist

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Date: 1/23/2024 1:01:00 PM
Kim, the perspective shifts with the different ways of looking at things. Having experiences while standing on the head and the different observations you make from this unique vantage point is an intriguing experience
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2024 3:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad!
Date: 1/22/2024 4:08:00 AM
I need to check out this artwork. Yes, that Cubist artwork and some other more modern art is kind of far out there. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2024 5:07:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 1/21/2024 7:46:00 PM
You have beautifully described the change it brings in perspective and dimensions when an art work especially the cubist or modern painting when hung upside down. This is a poem so unique and the theme so very unorthodox. Enjoyed the beauty and novelty of this poem, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2024 7:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa! :) Have a great week!
Date: 1/21/2024 5:02:00 PM
You have raw talent. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, one can read it many times. You must paint- or like painting. Awesome. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2024 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! :) I do love paintings :)
Date: 1/21/2024 7:49:00 AM
a unique and creative poem. I liked the flow of it. We have an abstract painting in our living room...funny store; we accidentally hung it upside down and saw many things in it over the years. When we moved, we hung it right side up...a whole different perspective.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2024 11:57:00 AM
LOL! Right?! I was in my recliner and started looking at this painting upside down…I had observed it many times but never from that perspective!
Date: 1/20/2024 5:00:00 AM
You really created the image here.. Great use of the form..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2024 6:57:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 1/19/2024 9:04:00 PM
i can't translate "fanch", oooppps, is it about seduction ? about art, however, that is awesome inspiration, have a sweet week end
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2024 9:53:00 PM
Fanch is an artist :)

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