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The Fallen

They drank all afternoon in a well of voices that rose in noise from places too mangled for language. What came out was shelled in a chorused cry venting the stifled pain of unhealed wounds. Just before closing in the thick, acrid air, yells were lifted high in hymn that, for some, spilt in the gutters of their lonely lives. No-one listened or saw into the haunted distances of a war that hung before their glazed, bloodshot eyes. Many died there too far away for anyone to reach them, even by pity. Some were mocked. There are no survivors.

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Date: 4/2/2023 11:26:00 PM
Very evocative and I'm fluctuating between being solidly in the pub, on a real battlefield (likely) or just a life of pain in the poem. I could ponder this one for a long time I'm sure. For me I landed in seeing behind the eyes of the miserable, in a drunken stupor claiming to enjoy themselves, where for a moment it doesn't seem worth putting them straight because it spoils their moment of existence. I may have floated in the wrong direction - it was something I thought about in Kleptomaniac
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/3/2023 6:35:00 AM
Taken from real life when I first started work and witnessed the shell shocked men suffering the nightmares of WW2 trying to drown their pain in pubs. Most suffered alone and were not given any support. This poem speaks to that memory.

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