Premiere Contest WinnerThe Fairy Garden

I am a fact-based scientist by trade,
Pragmatic, with many an accolade.
So know this when I say
I do not believe in Fairies, no way.

At Japanese Gardens I go for walks,
With my granddaughter who endlessly talks
About all topics, imagined and real,
And how the “Fairy Garden” makes her feel.

That six-year-old flits o’er bridges tiny,
Crossing golden koi ponds, fish all shiny!
She skips around carved stone lanterns so tall,
And wades in waters ‘round the waterfall.

On a bench, I muse about pleasant things,
I picture that child with gossamer wings,
My giggling fairy girl taking delight
In every branch, bug, and bird in sight.

I asked if she likes this quiet place for thinking.
“No Papa!” she exclaimed, “I like to hear them whispering!”
Who? “The fairies,” with exasperated look.
Her face a delightfully innocent open book.

Then off she goes without another word,
Leaving me to wonder what I’d just heard.
Know my science summary so profound:
Their wing motion makes a whispering sound.

January 12, 2022
Contest: Whispering Wings
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your write and your child are both a delight. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............
Lawless Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Wait til she discovers Unicorns....Love this "sigh-ence" based exploration of childhood truths....
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 4:33 PM
Your poem is so delightful Greg. I have a nine year old granddaughter who believes in fairy’s. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy! Blessings xxoo
Masciana Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 5:57 PM
Thanks so much! Children are our future.
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