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The Factory

Up at five everyday off to work, instead of play. The day begins with a cup of tea and the morning news on TV. Say goodbye to your family head on out to the factory. You punch the clock the whistle blows, you wonder how your day will go. It creeps by slowly, can't wait till three to go on home from the factory. Week after week, the same old routine the years go quickly along with your dreams. You long to retire so you will be free from the daily drudgery of the factory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 5/19/2016 2:42:00 PM
Carole Eaton, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/31/2014 7:20:00 AM
Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, carole
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