The Eyes So Wide Open and Full of Wonder

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A little girl wishes were sought
Talking to her pup as she thought
He sits patiently, and observes
A pat on the back he deserves

Looking mysterious she fought
A little girl wishes were sought
Her wee heart started to bubble
Not knowing it might cause trouble


At the end of the road, she sought
Walking beside her pup she taught
A little girl wishes were sought
At the road's end, forget-could-not

Would there be naught, but little frowns
With sorrow silently slows downs
Wishes gratified for now fought
A little girl wishes were sought

1/29/2016

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/5/2023 6:13:00 PM

Dear Eve, "little girl wishes" and "her pup"... your tender imagery is beautifully moving. Congratulations in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Joseph May

Date: 12/4/2023 1:52:00 AM

Very nicely penned Eve, Congrats on your win

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/17/2016 5:15:00 PM

Hi Eve, such a tender write. Your words touch the heart so easily with their simplicity. I like the emotional pull in this well written piece Eve. I send you a seven for this one Eve....Vlad.

White Sage

Date: 1/31/2016 3:52:00 AM

well written Eve...excellent quatern there

Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so very much, White Sage

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/30/2016 9:40:00 AM

a little girl wishes were found....but only her heart could hear the sound....of the thumping Love that always astounds....ensuring that her future only knows smiles and pleasurable frowns....very nice eve....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 2/3/2016 11:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Eric :-) Hugs Eve