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a howling demon a moment of perfect calm ~ the eye of the storm

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/28/2018 10:15:00 AM

Hello Tom, the eye of the storm can not be trusted. Enjoyed your haiku. Have a nice day my friend.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/28/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Darlene, it must be a terryfying experience to be caught up in it. Happy Easter. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/28/2018 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Darlene, I've never experienced one but have seen the aftermath of one, complete devastation. Tom

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/25/2018 11:52:00 PM

Howling demon describes it perfectly. Nice!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/26/2018 2:00:00 AM

Thank you Caren, I've only seen them on TV, but they are devastating to watch, the power of nature. Tom

Eve Roper

Date: 3/19/2018 12:28:00 AM

Nicely done, Tom, I still need to get the haikus right.. they are not so easy ..

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/19/2018 12:43:00 AM

Thank you Eve, it takes me a while, keep changing words and even a line until I'm happy. Tom

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2018 4:48:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one. The calm is a welcome if one is in the middle of the storm but if they know it is doubled sided then they know that the respite is only temporary. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/18/2018 6:25:00 PM

Thank you Sara, saw a documentary about them and it unleashed its fury and then there was a calm before starting up again. Tragic to see people losing everything they own in a very short space of time. Tom

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2018 1:12:00 PM

Very expressive, Tom. These 'demons' might be great to watch on film, but scary if in the vicinity! Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/18/2018 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Paul, Your right best viewed from a distance, they are so devastating. Tom.

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/18/2018 7:59:00 AM

Hi Tom , great Haiku, with global warming we can expect many more eyes on our beautiful planet :::)))))

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/18/2018 8:55:00 AM

Very true Niall, we do seem to be getting strange weather of late, with snow and wind.Not too much sun though. Tom

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/16/2018 7:09:00 PM

It sure is a great haiku! Hugs :)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/16/2018 9:00:00 PM

Thank you Akkina. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2018 5:31:00 AM

- Powerful haiku, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/16/2018 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine. Tom

Maria Williams

Date: 3/15/2018 10:23:00 PM

Another perfect Haiku Tom, so much imagery in your three descriptive lines, how do you do it? You stretch your imagination with an excellent delivery every time. This is a fave for me....Maria

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/16/2018 6:26:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Maria. Tom