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The Expansive Unknown

MY feet are wasted I have relived myselfUpon them //in powder-blue all my gross innocence pulls back the dreams of my youthful days My youthful dreams that I knew Close the crypt upon the somber skies And the Book of My Life have many torn pages I threw away just pulp scars of living; actually all by the power of love fallen so it's me I'm writing of You can take me to a place called hell -- I have a hate hanging on it's wall So then, my expansive unknown always be! That we all can dream a dream and eventually meet the day //we try to excuse all our regrets while love ones lament on such a beautiful day. :: ~ ::

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/13/2016 7:08:00 PM
Hi Ernest, it's not such a bad deal, to dream a little dream... Enjoyed... SKAT
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Ernest Robles
Date: 1/17/2016 2:23:00 PM
Hi SKAT A! What a kind comment! When I write prose I often write my own personal feelings. This particular piece though was not of my own emotions and it's hard to explain where many of my pieces come from. Have an awesome day! ~ Phillip

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