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The Evolution of Learning (Part One)

It amazes me how much man has evolved
Yet, How little he has learned
All around the globe
Millions die of disease and starvation
While the ever so intelligent creature known as man
Spends millions upon millions of dollars every single day
Killing each other
Instead of finding cures for the ill or feeding starving children
Oh sure, we dabble in those efforts
But we are committed to killing each other
Governments all around the globe
Spend most of their money
On their armies
Either to defend or attack
Their enemies
Supposedly, the most intelligent creature on earth
The intellectual creature known as man
If I may go so far
Mans commitment to war and killing
Goes far beyond any one mans term in office
It goes far beyond any one mans lifetime
It goes far beyond any century or any one era
From beginning to end, top to bottom
East to west, north to south
Red, yellow, brown, black or white 
Our commitment to killing each other
Is undeniable
How can a species that is smart enough to split atoms 
Creating weapons that will kill millions
Still be stupid enough to do it?
And now I see on the science channel
That man has now devised the Platonic beam
A beam of light that just disintegrates the target in an instant
At what price you ask?
Well I don’t know but I reckon if we diverted that money
To say solar energy projects
They could probably put a solar energy system
On every home in the world for free
Thus solving the energy crisis
Not to mention food in the icebox and medicine in the cabinet
Because of course when you create such an amazing new weapon
You need an entire new type of ship to deploy it from
Thus is born the next generation of war birds
They jettison into space 
Then go into super afterburner (A jet engine minus oxygen)
Which they said would reach like 20,000 miles an hour
So you could shoot halfway around the world
Disintegrate your enemy
And be home in time for supper
I believe when speaking of politics
It’s not a National Crisis
It’s a Global Epidemic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/19/2008 6:39:00 AM
In the words of Buddy Holly, '' RAVE ON '' this is so refreshing to see here michael, more power to your pen
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Date: 10/17/2008 9:24:00 AM
Right on, Michael. I believe in keeping a strong military to be used in DEFENSE of your nation and on humanitarian missions, not for oil shopping, not for aggression and not for shoving democracy down someone's throat in spite of the people not wanting it. Excellent observations and I'm a thirty year vet. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 10/16/2008 10:30:00 AM
We are on the same page with this one for sure my friend, wonderfully stated.... Will mankind ever learn or accept the true power of Love instead of selfishness and hatred. I Thank you for sharing the read :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/15/2008 5:29:00 PM
This is a realistic poetic piece. I like the essence of the message and how it touches on real life. The cat is out the bag so to speak. It's obvious what is taking place. I really like the ending lines. Great job and dramatic representation! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:01:00 PM
Yes this world is in a sad state of affairs....it is all about greed....it was never about people..people are expendable especially when it comes to power...and money... they mask it with the appearance that they care about individual....it is only a vizor...but the real motivation is ....power and money and how can we attain it at any cost.
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Date: 10/14/2008 3:36:00 PM
man has dominated man to his own injury Ecclesiates 8:9 I well know O Jehovah that to earthling man his way does not belong. It does not belong to man who is walking even to direct his step, if we turned to God instead of man, the world would be a better place, because God is a God of true justice men not so much, great write, filled with passion and truth, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:06:00 AM
when it comes down to it. opposable thumbs are the only thing that seperate us from the animals.
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Date: 10/13/2008 11:55:00 AM
So True Michael. Love your genuine concern. Well written. God bless you and your family. Love Michael
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Date: 10/13/2008 7:12:00 AM
So much truth embedded in your verses....only if they knew....
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