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The Evening Sky

The evening begins Now the sky changes slowly to darkness A man stands watching The sky turns grey black A bird flies to its nest For a peaceful sleep

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Date: 5/15/2020 7:10:00 PM
Darlene, Very tranquil imagery here! Thank you again!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/16/2020 7:16:00 AM
Hello Thomas Wells, I also find it tranquil You are so welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 3/16/2020 6:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this picture you painted, Darlene
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Date: 3/17/2020 11:45:00 AM
Hello Andrea, as i was creating this poem, i could see the man watching the bird fly to it's nest. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
Date: 3/14/2020 11:04:00 AM
Nicely panned a lovely and meaningful evening . Thank for share
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Date: 3/14/2020 1:36:00 PM
Hello Arjun, hello Arnun, thank you for the lovely comment. I am happy to share this m with you. have a nice day my friend.
Date: 3/14/2020 3:05:00 AM
So few words, yet the poem so meaningful..Love this.
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Date: 3/14/2020 1:37:00 PM
Hello Harry Horseman, I am pleased you likee this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 3/13/2020 2:56:00 PM
Just lovely, Darlene! Panagiota xx
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Date: 3/13/2020 5:50:00 PM
Hello Panagiota,hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend. Hug Darlene xx
Date: 3/13/2020 1:12:00 PM
- A lovely evening you describe, Darlene :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2020 5:52:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile,I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene xx
Date: 3/12/2020 6:25:00 PM
Wow... Darlene... your words make me think and imagine... Less is more A picture painted Thank you DAMOx
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Date: 3/13/2020 8:26:00 AM
Hello Damian Keady,yes less is more.Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

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