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Two weeks we'd been droving; and the end was now in sight In the distance was Dodge City, we'd be there before night I was on the trail with other cowboys from the Double Circle Ranch And we were looking forward to the saloon, the notorious Long Branch. We reached the railhead with the longhorns , just before sundown Me and the other cowboys were itching, ready to hit town The buyers were there waiting, hands were shook the deal done. We were aware there would be lowlifes, so we all packed a gun. First a shave then a hot bath to wash off the layers of dust Then buy some new clothes and long johns, the latter a must We then headed for the saloon and were ready for some rye After two weeks on the trail our throats were kinda dry. We walked through the bat wing doors, there were the usual stares The good time girls were beckoning us, to follow them upstairs We all asked for some whisky and some ordered hot foods Then the young bucks went upstairs; to satisfy their lustful moods. Old Jethro our foreman, the next day rode into town And spent the best part of two hours tracking us all down Bleary eyed and throbbing heads, no spoken words were said And thoughts of that long ride home filled us with dread. At the stables in a side street our horses were stood ready We paid the stable boy and mounted, we all felt quite unsteady We'd ride for nigh on two weeks crossing the great Texas plain Get home round up more Longhorns and do it all again. Written 20th January 2021 .

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Date: 4/19/2021 8:15:00 AM
Love "Cowboy". I look for it each day. I love to share with you my own.."Teanaway Valley" (a work in progress) for your examination.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/19/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Ken, have written quite a few western themed poems. Tom
Date: 2/11/2021 1:11:00 PM
Hi Tom. A shave, a bath; wash off the dust. Then to the saloon for some rye. And good time girls beckoning. Mmm, a few whiskies; then the fun. But you come away with an empty wallet. Tony
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Tony, then round up a few more cows and do it all again, what a life Tom
Date: 2/4/2021 11:18:00 AM
Quick revisit Tom. Congrats on your well deserved high placement... like what I predicted... yee haw! Terry
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Date: 2/4/2021 1:18:00 PM
Thank you very much for your return visit Terry, much appreciated. Hope your day is going well. Tom
Date: 2/4/2021 7:41:00 AM
Hi Tom, I'm just coming back to say congrats on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 8:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, and you too. Tom
Date: 2/4/2021 6:45:00 AM
Back to say, "Congratulations" on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write and picture. Enjoy your win/day with blessings as you write away.....................
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Date: 2/4/2021 8:29:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, I hope you are well. Tom
Date: 2/4/2021 6:24:00 AM
Hi Tom. I love this write. I've seen a few cattle drives - nothing dirtier or dustier. But the pay was pretty good, for back then anyway. I guess that's why they did it all again. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, im happy you enjoyed it. Hope your day is going well. Tom
Date: 2/3/2021 10:30:00 AM
Remember Bonanza and Cheyenne, (hope I've spelled the last one right.) They were my favorites. We lived in Zambia, but TV came to Zambia years before it came to South Africa. Loved your poem. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:31:00 AM
Oh yeah, loved old JR, mean as a rattlesnake lol, and the spin off Knots Landing
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/3/2021 10:39:00 AM
Yes, Rawhide I loved that series as well. Plain old cowboy films they were as popular - remember Dallas and Dynasty. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/3/2021 10:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, they don't make great westerns like they used to, loved bonanza and rawhide with a young Clint Eastwood. Hope alls well. Tom
Date: 2/2/2021 10:51:00 AM
you are a natural storyteller tom, love it:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2021 11:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan, as you know I have a keen interest in the American old west, must have read every Louis L'Amour book and countless others. Tom
Date: 2/1/2021 9:32:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your new writes. What a story/write this one is. You are a "Wonderful" story teller. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day/week...........
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Date: 2/1/2021 10:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula im pleased that you enjoyed it. I hope you are well. Tom
Date: 1/31/2021 8:10:00 PM
LOve this rambling tale. Tom. the flow and rhyme superb..
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Date: 2/1/2021 2:41:00 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit Harry, hope you are well. Tom
Date: 1/31/2021 3:35:00 PM
Great cowboy poem Tom, GL in the Contest..
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Date: 1/31/2021 4:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Joseph. I'm happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 1/31/2021 10:33:00 AM
Great story, Tom. Enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/31/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/30/2021 3:46:00 PM
You are such a good story teller Tom. I thoroughly enjoyed your tale. Thanks for your Visit Tom.
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Date: 1/30/2021 4:19:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard, you're welcome, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/30/2021 11:10:00 AM
Great one Tom. You brought me right there with your story! I hope all is well :)
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Date: 1/30/2021 12:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, I'm happy you enjoyed it, I'm well and I hope that you are too. Tom
Date: 1/29/2021 12:02:00 PM
What a great story you told in your poem, Tom. I heard cowboys and fishermen have the most strenuous jobs and your poem confirms that. Still, I think I would have liked this type of life. Best wishes for a big win in the contest, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2021 12:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn, im happy you enjoyed it. I hope you are well. Tom
Date: 1/28/2021 10:55:00 AM
I'm still betting on this being a top winner!
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea for your return visit, been reading some great entries for this one, yours included, Tom
Date: 1/27/2021 5:48:00 PM
What a great story, Tom...
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Date: 1/27/2021 5:59:00 PM
Thank you very much Akkina, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/26/2021 8:47:00 PM
Tom, Love this story and saucy characters of the days on a cattle drive. Mesmerized in the moment and enjoyed it to the end 'Of The Trail' Tom. So well written it flowed along the page, hot food and all. -Richard
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Date: 1/27/2021 2:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Richard, I've always loved tales of the old west and it has influenced many cowboy poems I've written. Tom
Date: 1/25/2021 7:38:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this cowboy story from beginning to end Tom. Best wishes for the contest. God bless. ~ Ani
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Date: 1/25/2021 8:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Ani, I'm happy you it I hope you havda lovely week. Tom
Date: 1/25/2021 7:14:00 AM
Hello Tom, I am also a fan of the wild west.I watched a lot of cowboys movies in the past. Enjoyed everyone of them. I have enjoyed this poem. enjoy your day my friend,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2021 9:50:00 AM
Hello tom, Ihave always enjoyed a western movie. I use to watch them with my Godfather. He passed a long time ago. i miss him. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/25/2021 7:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene, Ive always loved movies, books and the historical books on the subject. Tom
Date: 1/24/2021 10:21:00 AM
Nice to meet you,Tom, This poem and its storycaptivated me. Carried me right along with all my senses involved. Thank you.
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Date: 1/25/2021 1:05:00 AM
And you too Sally, I'm happy you enjoyed it, as you've probably guessed Im a big fan of the old wild west. Tom
Date: 1/22/2021 7:44:00 PM
Wonderful folk lore poetry, Tom, there's a song or two in there as well. Love it.
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Date: 1/23/2021 1:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/22/2021 3:07:00 PM
Great story, Tom. Almost like someone narrating a classic old western. I’m sure this will place high in the contest. Congrats in advance. Terry
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Date: 1/23/2021 1:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Terry, and for the vote of confidence, but I've seen some great entries. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Date: 1/22/2021 2:24:00 PM
The expression and imagery here are great Tom. I could see it all play out before my eyes. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/22/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Judy, im glad you enjoyed it, hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 1/22/2021 1:37:00 PM
Great old cowboy tale Tom, really brings the memories back of loads of cowboy programmes on TV in the 60s. Super pen this is no doubt. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 1/22/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon, ive always enjoyed tales of the old west and grew up watching zorro, gunsmoke and rawhide, happy days, hope you are well. Tom
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