The End of Summer

The meadow lies ravaged
beneath the scorching sun,
fields covered with dust,
grasses yellow and flat,
sunflowers hang their heads.

Only dandelions survive
releasing seed into the air.
Few birds chirp, singing sad songs,
Spiders move slowly
weaving their webs.
Insects undeterred abound.
Ants carry their meager harvest
to their underground caves.

The breeze too cold,
the skies occasionally grey.
No farmer tills the land,
afraid of sweat and backaches.
No tractor sputters to life
no tools lie around,
Only a sickle is stuck upright 
in the fallow land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/10/2020 9:58:00 AM
Its a sad time as Summer ends, but I think any season since Corona came to live with us is sad. We are entering Summer, 2nd month of Spring and our garden is blossoming. A wonderful write dear friend., Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/8/2020 1:53:00 PM
Reminds me of younger days, growing up in West Texas. I thought it quite beautiful actually. Lovely write Victor. Linda
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:17:00 PM
I love your beautiful imagery, such as in your description of the birds and insects. Summer's end is so bittersweet. Lovely poem! :)
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Date: 10/7/2020 8:58:00 PM
Somber the end of Summer but I rather enjoy Fall. Blessings, Friend!
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Date: 10/7/2020 6:49:00 PM
Great imagery from the sunflowers hanging their heads to the laziness of the farmers. Great write.
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Date: 10/7/2020 4:59:00 PM
A stark contrast to summer's start, Very nicely penned Victor..
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Date: 10/7/2020 3:58:00 PM
I like autumn, but I love summer more. A great visual write, Victor. :) ~Angie
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Date: 10/7/2020 12:48:00 PM
sorry to hear about your vertigo, hope it gets better soon
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:16:00 AM
Nicely done Victor. Perfect depiction of the ravaged land, end of Summer. Linda
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Date: 10/7/2020 8:20:00 AM
I too, love the imagery here, Victor.
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Date: 10/7/2020 5:23:00 AM
strakly beautiful poem coming from your throbbing heart and quill...you astound, victor!...huggs
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Date: 10/7/2020 5:12:00 AM
Such minute observations! Wonderfully descriptive--I see the images of fallow land and season changing its persona.. in every verse. Masterful write, as always, Victor.
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Date: 10/7/2020 2:53:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery described as Fall changes nature!
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Date: 10/7/2020 1:59:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Victor ... but, it's a sad sight ... everything loses its summer luster - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2020 1:56:00 AM
The sun shows no mercy, I for one welcome autumn and its cooler weather. Tom
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Date: 10/7/2020 12:23:00 AM
So are the ways of nature and man Victor, nicely described poem. Thank you for sharing your pen
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Date: 10/6/2020 11:25:00 PM
Wow, such a powerful picture of how the searing heat of summer has left the land so dry and barren. Very atmospheric Victor. Take care my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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