Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

The End of a Nightmare

Overwhelming fear
Paralized by dread
Insecurities
Doubt abilities
Future not very safe

Darkness pervades
Can't see future
Lover leaves doubts
Balancing act

Love assures
He takes hand
Surrender

Leader
Alfa

Male

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Nette Onclaud February 14, 2011 at 5:59 AM if an alfa male can be this altruistic, i'll buy one, lol!! such a wonderfully-written piece, sara! :) huggs, nette

John Loving Iii February 14, 2011 at 5:30 AM alpha male, my dear. john

Gert W. Knop February 14, 2011 at 4:55 AM Nice example of that poetry form, Sara!

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2011 at 9:26 PM It's good when they "step up, " Sara. I don't mind an alpah male. Seems nowadays, some of them have become almost more sensitve than their women!

Robert Pettit February 13, 2011 at 7:03 PM This looks like a fine example of a diminished hexaverse. I will have to try writing something like this soon.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 13, 2011 at 4:20 PM Enjoiyed the nice poetic form of Diminished Hexaverse on The end of a nightmare. wish you good luck in the contest, sara

Michael J. Falotico February 13, 2011 at 3:26 PM Strong write my dear.. powerful words with intense meanings...always with love Michael