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The End of a Nightmare

Overwhelming fear
Paralized by dread
Insecurities
Doubt abilities
Future not very safe

Darkness pervades
Can't see future
Lover leaves doubts
Balancing act

Love assures
He takes hand
Surrender

Leader
Alfa

Male

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/14/2011 5:59:00 AM
if an alfa male can be this altruistic, i'll buy one, lol!! such a wonderfully-written piece, sara! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:30:00 AM
alpha male, my dear. john
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:55:00 AM
Nice example of that poetry form, Sara!
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:26:00 PM
It's good when they "step up, " Sara. I don't mind an alpah male. Seems nowadays, some of them have become almost more sensitve than their women!
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:03:00 PM
This looks like a fine example of a diminished hexaverse. I will have to try writing something like this soon.
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Date: 2/13/2011 4:20:00 PM
Enjoiyed the nice poetic form of Diminished Hexaverse on The end of a nightmare. wish you good luck in the contest, sara
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:26:00 PM
Strong write my dear.. powerful words with intense meanings...always with love Michael
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