The End Is Near

fiery skies rage black the dawn's light will never come ash falls from death's cloud wild beasts devour seed the dry earth starves her children thunder is our cries rivers flow crimson the moon drips blood from her wounds earth trembles from fear battle swords are drawn cowards flee to hills and caves destruction finds all for Gail Doyle's End of the World Armageddon contest June 19, 2012
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Onclaud Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 8:59 PM
congrats on your super fine win, rhonda!..:) huggs!
Muzzey Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 8:59 AM
A wonderful write Rhonda, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Armageddon" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
Harrington Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Congrats on your win...love the visuals! Tanya
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 12:40 PM
SOUP MAIL....
Merryman Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 6:19 AM
Strong visuals and precise wording. Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece, Rhonda! Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really liked what you said at Deb's blog. Luv, Andrea
O'Leary Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 3:22 AM
Beautiful sequence... Terry
Hu Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 12:46 AM
Its stark and true.
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 9:02 PM
I think you did this series very well, Rhonda. Hope to see it high on the winners' list.
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:43 PM
I just sat down to write comething for this contest..afraid you have written one that will be difficult to beat. Well done..I like the second one the best..but like them all. BG
Sivey Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:34 PM
This is a fabulous description of the end of the Earth! You have painted great imagery and have given us visions of grandiosity! I really enjoyed this fine poem my friend! Great work!!
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