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'the End Is In Sight'

heartache tears frustration all tumbling down like a stream of cold water engulfed me eyes fighting to stay open knowing the battle isn't mine the Master is on the forefront I stand back enduring all that comes my way even the pain knowing they are short-lived knowing this too has an end… ©241120112020

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 5:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Wilma. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/30/2011 8:48:00 PM

The race is not to the swift nor the battle to the strong - has not God made foolish the wise things of the world. You have found your place Wilma and stated it so beautifully.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/30/2011 7:32:00 AM

Right on. I can hear you loud and clear Miss Wilma and with that attitude and faith all will be well for sure! You wrote this in a nice format. ..on a lighter note ... had "mother and child reunion" fried in olive oil this morning for breakfast. It was great. I thought of you and would have gladly fried some up for you! What's "mother and child reunion"? ---- why ...chicken and eggs of course! love ya Wilma... have a great day

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/28/2011 11:11:00 AM

Oh shucks, this is sad but still has that hope in it-- I could relate to this in a way, Missy-- hmm we sometimes on a bad sucky day-- what I look forward to is "there's a bed in sight" and I can sleep it off... but yes, having that faith in God is what's important -- ok I am dense-- what was the kelly nelly deal? I am clueless what you are talking about? Maybe I need to fish me some common sense?! mwahugs!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "MIX" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/26/2011 8:43:00 AM

Heartaches poured upon a page. So sad.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2011 1:52:00 AM

WILMA, Congratulations on your wonderful win . I would also like to thank you for the support in my contest. I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving. Take care, and have yourself a great night,..xoxox~p.d.

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/25/2011 10:28:00 AM

I see this write seems to echo your feelings Wilma, i see you are holding onto the "Lord however" you will be in my thoughts, yours Joe..!

Tony Lane

Date: 11/25/2011 9:44:00 AM

Stay strong Wilma. I will pray for you too.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/25/2011 8:20:00 AM

Wow Wilma this is so complex yet, set the mind reeling. wonderful poem. Oh by the way, you are so beautiful (Your Photo) harry

Shannon Deane

Date: 11/24/2011 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Wilma for your kind thoughts...stopped by to return the favor and enjoyed every word...thanks again...luv shannon

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/24/2011 1:15:00 PM

* "I Love This Rich In Colours Depthful Poetic Painting * Dear Sweet Beautiful Wilma * But Then Again * I Just Simply Love You * Sooo, What's New * Very Beautiful * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *