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The End

I remember when we first met, That night you offered me that funny cigarette. You were so kind, sweet and gentle, What happened? Now you act like your ING MENTAL! You made me beg for my life, When all I wanted was to be your wife, Have a family, A normal life, But all you ever gave me, Was grief and strife. I remember the first time, And I'll always remember the last, You hurt us too bad! There's no turning back now, You've took it too far. You said you loved me, But how can you after doing that!? Goodbye! Catch ya later! I'd say have a good life, But you don't deserve, For me to be that nice! GO TO HELL!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/28/2018 5:03:00 AM
The feelings are pretty clear here. Well done, Laura.
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Date: 7/27/2018 10:35:00 PM
Laura.. you slam well!!
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