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The studio room had been empty for years. No one ever entered. No one knew why. As empty as shadows and blank canvasses. All that remained there were shafts of light, Where specks of dust danced in that golden hue, That disappeared every sunset and returned at dawn. Maybe someone had memories of the room. Maybe they were all long forgotten. There was eeriness, as if inaudible whispers remained, Bouncing echoes off the walls. A chill was imagined even on sunny days. Nothing remained, not even prospects. No hope lingered, no anticipation of a new coat of paint. Did spirits take refuge, because of a diabolical incident ? Be they captives, waiting for redemption to be released? Emptiness, at least that gave the room a name. It was, is and always will be, The empty room.

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Date: 6/11/2024 8:26:00 PM
A wonderful write. You at least made the winners list. Big congrats, my friend
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Date: 6/11/2024 9:04:00 PM
Heheheheh Thank you sweet one.. There is always a silver lining... :) Wen
Date: 6/11/2024 7:04:00 PM
Dear SV, your stirring poem is evocative and emotive and so beautifully expressed. I was especially moved by "As empty as shadows and blank canvasses" and "There was eeriness, as if inaudible whispers remained" and "Emptiness, at least that gave the room a name" - that really brings a sense of sad identity to this forlorn place. Superb poetry my friend. Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/11/2024 7:45:00 PM
Dear Susan, There are a small handful of poets on Soup that I revere as masters of conveying feeling. You are certainly one of them. I remember the first poem of yours that I read, and read it again, even more delighted in my find. I don't comment much any more. I have limited time to spend and as self therapy, decided to spend that short time writing. I do appreciate your wonderful comments, but it makes me feel guilty that I don't reciprocate the compliments to your poems, so well deserved. With utmost sincerity, Wen

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