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The Empty Last Line Collaboration

Shielded from sunlight If you carry your own clouds (Fill in the last line...)

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 7/26/2023 9:06:00 PM

You make your own storm :) I tried something like this once, didn't really take haha, cheers!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/26/2023 9:59:00 PM

Good one! Yeah you never know if you'll sit twiddling your thumbs :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/26/2023 11:38:00 AM

Your a water sprite … Belle

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/26/2023 11:40:00 AM

Cute imagery :)

John Lawless

Date: 7/26/2023 5:32:00 AM

you won't need sun block

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/26/2023 7:41:00 AM

Thanks John - this feels like a further feeder line - perhaps for a tanka. Shielded from sunlight, If you carry your own clouds, You won't need sun block, For your descent into hell, the hell of your own making - haha fun game! :D

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/26/2023 5:28:00 AM

(parasol holds shroud) hope that’s ok Dilly, great leading lines, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/26/2023 7:38:00 AM

Thanks David - good take on the prompt, thanks for joining in :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2023 12:21:00 AM

"silver lining fails"... hugs jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/26/2023 3:34:00 AM

Might have missed it's chance now but added x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2023 12:32:00 AM

feel free to make it into a collaboration - if you add 'collaboration' to the title hopefully it will gain more attention.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/26/2023 12:29:00 AM

Excellent!